Reviews for Silk and Hot Metal

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minium 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseyou completely captured the essence of Yuffie, I think...the way this doesn't take itself to seriously but is at th same time really painful. The grief and love and hate are expressed so well. There are too many phrases I liked to repeat the, but especially "tiger of pain" and the last few paragraphs just really got me. This was so enjoyable to read, thank you for writing such a good piece!
XxRazor2RosaryxX 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. Um... See, I don't even know what to say. Just... Wow. Loved it. x
clockwork starlight 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuse“We will duel,” Vincent would say. “Hn,” Leon would say. And then they would stare at each other and think of dark things to see which of them could hold out longer. Best lines EVAR. I love the voice of it, it's all teenage-drama-but-not-really because normal teenagers don't have to deal with that kind of crap and it's so totally Yuffie in how juvenile it is and yet so desperately tragic-and-in-denial-about-it. And I love the reference to Cloud showing up in the Colosseum a la Vinnie, because he would be a tactless jerkoff that way. It's absolutely beautiful and you rock.
IVIaedhros 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseHe’d probably rival Leon in the Angsty McAngst department. Heck, they’d probably have Angst contests. She could just see it now: “We will duel,” Vincent would say. “Hn,” Leon would say. And then they would stare at each other and think of dark things to see which of them could hold out longer. Gawd, that funny.
Sienna03 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseOh. Just...oh. Brilliant word choice and progression. Brilliant execution. God, you're just brilliant.
Thunder-Angelist.Rawr. 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abuseLOO OO OO OO OO OO OO OO OOVE. THIS. FIC!! Oh godd!! Im in love.. lol You're good. Really good. I love the way you use words and put stuff together that has nothing to do with the other and it still sounds awesome. YOU ROCK! btw, yhay for squffie
mellish 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI can't believe I missed this fic before. ^^ I've always loved this heartache for KH!Yuffie, and even if I don't exactly like the pairing, I can totally see why it works. There were many hilarious lines, Yuffie's tone was insane and genuine, and it flowed along well. The descriptions were very nicely done. Great job!
Martial artist-Mariko 2007-10-14 ch 1,	abuseThat was excellent. Great job, loved the details. 10/10
Valentine'sNinja 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseWow, I'm not a big fan of Leon/Yuffie, but I must say that this is very well written and I enjoyed it. The way you compared Leon and Vincent is just so amazing, though I'm really a Yuffie/Vincent fan. I liked this fic and hope to read more! Joey
The Funky Bubbly Gurlz 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseThat was intense and amazing! Your comparisons were on par and the bitter emotions were so raw and real. Good job! ~Shizzy
mystic-angel1 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseNuh. This is the Squffie I have been pining for. I want to fold it up and put it in the chest pocket of my shirt or the ass pocket of my jeans. Gawd. This was like having a nap after being sleep deprived for three months (try nine). flails Alright, now that I'm done with the crazies. Your writing style is smooth and entertaining and oh-so Yuffie like, and I absolutely adore your characterizations. Vincent being like oozy Lava rock sounds about right. I love how you make Yuffie think, kind of in a different, backwards and unwillingly poetic kind of way. Score. I love it. Meanwhile, I kind of want to have sex with Leon on the library wall. :\
AmbivalentAngyl 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseThat was sweet and amusing in a dark way. Love the angst duel by the way. G'job.
Tna-Alysse 2007-06-08 ch 1,	abusedamn your strong use of diction is so powerful it touches me right in the gut. i feel the hate coming through these words. amazing talent you have. keep up the good work
Sinister-Senna 2007-06-07 ch 1,	abuseApplauds. Beautiful, beautiful, angsty Squffie. Fanstastic. I love it. You should write more. YAY!
Mengde 2007-06-07 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was powerful, to say the least. Forget KH's FF characters being AU versions of themselves, you did this beautifully without restoring to beautiful prose; it remained very Yuffie, or at least very your Yuffie - who I like, so it's good. The imagery was particularly potent; you get an accurate sense of the characters' mutual self-loathing and it really gets to you. Great job.

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