A good tale, well told!
4 out of 5 stars, for the same reasons as given by "Pat" before.
It did so much remind me of the Green Hornet radio program, just the same mix of serious and camp. Well done!
'nuff said

I very glad to see another green hornet story posted. There are far too few of them, so it's always nice to have a new one to read.

that said, there are few improvements that need to be made. they are mainly grammatical such as using lied (telling a lie) instead of laid (as in laid down). there's a little too much use of words such as suddenly, unexpectedly, raced, etc. I know this is meant to add a more breathless tone to the story, but i think rephrasing or at least rethinking some of these areas could accomplish the same thing without so much repetition. also remember spellcheck and roget's thesaurus are the writer's best friends. you might also want to have someone proofread your story to take care of the small problems that are present in it.

otherwise an enjoyable read and i hope you keep up the good work. remember-- practice makes perfect. :)

pat

A very nice start. My only concern is with the description of the Hornet mask. It sounds more like the 20's/30's Hornet mask than that of the 60's and beyond. But still, you have me intrigued. And as a Hornet fan, that is saying something!

I noticed you write Batman fanfics too. What did you think of the time when they crossed over Batman(Adam West) with the Green Hornet on their television shows?