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| Master of Yaoi 1326 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseloved it...it's so cute |
| Locked 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read this entire piece you have, but I wanted to point out something I found interesting. Yours is very similar to the story "30 DAYS OF HELLISH FATHERHOOD" by Flaylda. Some of the comments in the narration as well as the way the summaries are worded are incredibly similar. I wonder, is this an odd coincidence? I think it's something that you should look into. As I've already stated though, I haven't read your story in its entirety, I just felt compelled to point that out after seeing them both in the same C2, "The 5th Commandment." Cheers |
| devilangel123 2007-06-15 ch 2, | abuseYay! Another chapter! Still some mistakes but it's getting better! Keep it up! It's great! ^^ |
| Black Jackal 2007-06-13 ch 2, | abuseha, Dant got girl troubles, can't wait for next chap. |
| babythumberlina 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHi, yr story is nice. Good work, keep it up. |
| Black Jackal 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abusetheir isnt much funier then reading about the cildhood of the sparda twins. Can't wait for chapter two and I say Virgile should just kill dante for all that crap he's done (though as we all know killing a sparda is harder then mundus's head)... |
| armadillo1210 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWonderful your story! Pls continue your story. But there are some grammar mistakes.Do take note. |
| devilangel123 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This is so funny! Keep up the good work and there are some grammatical errors here and there, but overall loved it! P.s. Can't wait for the next chapter! |