I thought for sure that I left a review for this chapter. Good thing I went back to re-read it again.

Great job with characterization. Bulma and Vegeta obviously wouldn't be all lovey at this point in time,(considering that they don't even have a serious relationship until the years after the Cell Saga). I hope you'll update soon.

O.o oh i soo cant wait!

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i love your story
update soon pls

Great Story! I can't wait for you to update!

OH GOD PLEASE MORE MORE... yes i dying to know

Woohoo! Things are getting very interesting! I'mm gonna like Yamcha's reaction, I think. XD

Keep up the good work!

Heehee, I would have submitted this sooner but the website keeps being screwy. Anyway! I love this story, its a fun read. Great job, its nice to see a story with proper grammar, puncuation, and also a plausible storyline. Heehee! :) I'll be keeping an eye out for this one!

Incredible story. More.

ah no you evil writers and ending at the best parts n_n hehe cant wait for more :D

Very nice. I hope that your husband is fine. Can't wait for more.

Wow! I love this story but I kinda had to browse through previous chapters...now the only way to fix that little issue would be a...fast update! ;) Thanks for the update!

Benny

nice,i caNT WAIRFOR THE NEXT CHAP!!

update soon!
keep up the good work, yo.

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i think it's brilliant! but i am confused cos i have no idea of hu the L from BL is... lol
i can really picture vegeta like that (im talking about the way he acts damn it! not the sex scene! altho... ;])
but i picture him taller... maybe it's just the hair...
w/e...
in my mind he is a tall strong warior hu is my absolute fav character! bulma 2! lol
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OO. this is so exciting :)
hurry and update!