 Fragile-Strength 2007-09-05 . chapter 1Er... Wow!
If nothing else, it was very well written. I, too, think it was out of character for Hermione, but that's part of fanfiction, isn't it? Being ooc...
But, it was very well written, as I said. Concise, to the point, harsh, cruel - despite the fact I'm rather fond of Ron and the R/Hr ship, it was very entertaining. =D
-Cayenne |
 Russian Jewish Joupa 2007-06-30 . chapter 1Oh wow, this story, so harsh, so unlike the Hermione I picture.
But, nonetheless, it was good, so to speak. Different, cruel, but very well written.
Good job, only talented writers can pull this type of plot off. |
 lupinsstar 2007-06-08 . chapter 1I didn't realise you'd put quite so mcu Ron-bashing in it when you told me about it this morning... still, very good, always good cos Kelci rules at everything!
Kelci x |
 dracohater 2007-06-07 . chapter 1 wow... that was an um interesting interpretation of the future of Ron and Hermione's relationship... but you know that if hermione was in character she would never do that... |
 someone sinister 2007-06-07 . chapter 1 i weep for the times where people could just as easily put this in the Dramione section...
but it does look like i win when it comes to the shipping section
"I scorn and I mock and I try to distance myself as far from you as possible"
Ha... so that whole Ron/Lavender thing didnt happen right... Hermione wasnt jeolous of Lavender coz she had show ron "She was the safe bet" because Lavender had never gave ron doubt what could happen between them - Hermione did... and she ended up on that huge pile of jeolousy
Ron Wins... :P |
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