 zafaran 2007-10-31 . chapter 12I love this story so far, and I'm eagerly looking forward to your getting a chance to work on it some more. This is a fascinating AU, and one that I hope you will work with in the future when this story is done. If it's not just overwhelming Real Life that's causing you to question your ability to finish this tale, may I recommend "The Artist's Way" by Julia Cameron. Even without working the structure of the book, just using the Morning Pages and Affirmations every day are a great help for working through creativity issues, and real life hassles, too. My writing flows the best it has ever done when I'm consistent about writing Morning Pages, and it's also helped me do things like work through the last of the grief from the death of my mother. I highly recommend the habit. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm |
 def 2007-10-19 . chapter 12 interesting - but it not what you done with Draco-
It more WHAT HAVE HARY done with SNAPE ?
waiting for more and sooner :)
wish to hear Harry reaction. |
 TheExclamatoryPanda 2007-10-08 . chapter 12wow, i really like this story!! what a sweet chapter!! please update soon. |
 snapes griffindor 2007-10-07 . chapter 12good story, update soon!
-snapes griffin- |
 Hermeticia Smythe 2007-10-07 . chapter 12Brilliant story. I am really enjoying it and ever so glad you have not given it up. Keep up the good work |
 dgpolo 2007-10-07 . chapter 12I really enjoyed reading this, such a nice complicated backstory. I hope you can update soon. I tend to agree with you about DH. Thank you. |
 def 2007-10-03 . chapter 12 very very angry (don't like shuch untruth things )
where the next chapter :(
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I wish new chapter :P |
 Maria 2007-07-28 . chapter 11 Guess I'll just have to wait patiently.
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Who am I kidding? Are you sure about that vacation - you could just, you know, update instead!? Looking forward to the next chapter(s)! |
 SSeselene 2007-07-27 . chapter 11Im so sad for deathly hollows.
Im so happy x this update.
Thank you! please don't stop |
 def 2007-07-26 . chapter 10 and what's going to happend now ?
waiting |
 def 2007-07-24 . chapter 9 we are waiting...
you know :P |
 silverskies 2007-07-14 . chapter 10I empathise with you with the whole - DH which side is Severus on scariness...
This is really interesting though, especially the idea of Confessors - more of the mind-melding than overwhelming love...which is better or more useful or something... :)
The trio must be very close now I suppose, what with Harry having seen everything of Ron and Hermione. Eep - having your soul stripped bare before someone... scary.
Harry swooning |
 starciel 2007-07-11 . chapter 9Awesome! I hope you'll update soon. I don't know if I understood the Confessor thingy right, though. Harry is First Confessor and thats another freaky superpowert thing that makes him different but he somehow managed to share that with Hermione and Ron, right? It would be interesting to see how the Ministry reacted to that. They can't have been too happy to have Harry as someone with an ancient claim to authority in the lay enforcement department. The way you write this reminds me of one of my fav films, Equilibrium. They've got these cool dudes, the Cleriker, dunno how the are called in English, but the Confessor thing reminds me of them. All strict codex, meaningful phrases... Yay. Keep going.
Love Ciel |
 Maria 2007-07-08 . chapter 9 Here I am again...
Harry is the Potions Master - who'd have thought that! But what can I say? Still love the story, so please continue and update! |
 whitehound 2007-07-07 . chapter 8I like the fact that Snape is nearly willing to metaphorically shoot himself in the foot, just for a good punchline... |