I have a question, if Charlie is a girl why does Rizu blush whenever she calls her princess? Is she emarrassed? I'M SO CONFUSED! TT.TT

First I would like to say that I'm really sorry that no one has reviewed your incredibly well written story yet. And yes, even though I've only read the first chapter I think it's one of the best Kingdom Hearts fanfictions. I've ever read. (though that's not saying much.)

Second, where you playing the game while you where writting this? It is incredibly close to what actually happened. GOOD JOB!

Third, I think it was really cool how you didn't exactly give Riza's name away in the beginning. It gave it a sense of mystery *cue scary music*

Lastly, I totally love the fact that even though it's really early in the story something major happened what with the fight with Uso, graduating, her father going to the front lines(are they in a war?), and THEN going to a different world. It is such a refreshing pace.

P.S. Do I detect a hint of Naruto? Will he show up later in the story! *jumps up and down excitedly*

Well, I'm going to get back to reading your story, hope you get more reviews!