I feel ashamed that I disappeared from ff dot net for so long. I never checked my old email inbox... and you've been writing so much! I'm fail as a fanoby... forgive me?

This was awesome. The way you write in second person makes me feel like I am emo Hikaru... and I don't even mind hooking up with Akira instead of (the much cuter) Waya! Tee hee...

Thanks for still writing. Usually life sweeps away all the good fanfic authors over time. ...though, I suppose you're the one winning. Writing feels good, doesn't it? Especially when you've got genius coming out your fingertips.. you should be proud, you!

Much love!


~AO

Beautiful. I loved the sense of connections here, of a link between Hikaru and Akira and Sai and go, all twining around. Hikaru's musings about timelessness are also lovely. Very well-written, with a nice use of language and emotion. I felt that the word "pilgrimage" at the start really captured the sense of the whole story as a scene.

Fantastic :)

That was really beatiful. It was_well, I must admit_ amzing. Really deep... I don't often see this kind of writing on this site, and really glad to read one. Love it.

This is really pretty.

=]

Beautiful.

Whoa... Deep and thoughtful. It pulls me in like strong undercurrent and drowned me almost before I realize it.

The use of 2nd person is very good, too

Keep up the good work!

Beautiful.