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| ChristinaAngel 2008-10-05 ch 38,  | abuseI liked how you got the two POVs of the bad guys and the good guys so we can see what's happening on both sides. It was interesting how they can't legally arrest Naraku because technically he hasn't done anything wrong. Thanks for updating! |
| LoVe23 2008-10-05 ch 38, | abuseLoved it...can't wait to read more! |
| Kattana 2008-10-04 ch 38, | abuseat least Jakoutsu id just one way gay unlike Bankooutsu. I wonder if anyone else knows or is he jus on the DL. Anyways i hope hings urn out well for Inuyash and the others cuz Naraku is dispicable. |
| Deathmvp 2008-10-04 ch 38, | abuseNice the way you have the interacting and growing closer with out making it feel forced. |
| Kaoli water goddess 2008-10-04 ch 38, | abuseHm... so Kikyou's allegiance is turning? It kind of looks like Bankotsu's isn't, so what can we expect from this side of the table? It could be some interesting results. And the other side looks like all they're doing is playing the waiting game; a game which I don't think they're happy to be playing at all. Oh well... we'll just see what happens next. |
| Crazy With Happiness 2008-09-24 ch 37, | abusepoor kohaku. update soon :D |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-09-19 ch 36, | abuseReally good chapters. How everyone found out about Inuyasha's human night was really funny and I liked to see that little shot of Kohaku and Kanna. Thanks for updating! |
| LoVe23 2008-09-08 ch 37, | abuseCongratulations...i loved this chapter...Naraku is crazy! can't wait to read more! |
| Shadow Cat17 2008-09-08 ch 37, | abuseOh this is great! I so can't wait to read more! |
| Deathmvp 2008-09-08 ch 37, | abuseVery nice. I love how the siblings are starting to rebuild themself's even if it is only a little with eachothers help. Even the less then major players are fleshed out. All to offen they are left without any though. |
| Nasuto91Thehalfdemon 2008-09-07 ch 37, | abuseAgain! I love it! The dog part was like WHAT!! lol Damn! It was great, and I am so glad that you continue to write. Thank you so much..I really appreciate the fact that you take time out of your life to finish this story for us as well as yourself. |
| Kattana 2008-09-07 ch 37, | abuseanother great chapter. Since now both parties know about each other the battle will soon begin and famiies will be reunited. |
| Kaoli water goddess 2008-09-07 ch 37, | abuseI have to wonder now; what does Kohaku think of Sango since Naraku's been brainwasing him. He appeared hurt, but then talking to Kanna, I'm not sure anymore. And the fact that Naraku could find so much information on Kagome and her family is not good for our group. Kagome's family is in danger and I'm not sure that Sesshomaru's guard will be able to stop Naraku. We'll just have to see what comes next. Great work and I can't wait for more! |
| Lady Emerald Black 2008-09-05 ch 36, | abuseWow...I've finally finished reading up to this point. Not bad. I still like your story very much. One of the things I like the best is the addition of multiple Inuyasha characters, and have them in semi-character. Good Job! Waiting for more, LEB |
| Crazy With Happiness 2008-09-04 ch 36, | abuseoh no...i hope the higurashis will b ok. update soon :D |