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| kasoy 2008-04-09 ch 2,  | abusewa ., you should totally update this one., haha., uhm albeit the grammar errors slowed me down a bit.. its still good ^_^ yeah i like it |
| Sinshana 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Please update! :D |
| Lance Menard 2007-12-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou know what sucked for me while I was reading chapter 2? I hadn't noticed this but I scrolled to the point where the bottom was the last line of the chapter so when I was finishing that line I went to scroll down and THERE WAS NO MORE T_T In other words, I liked it ^_^ hope to see more. Out of curiosity, how many chapters do you think there'll be? My anxiety is going through the roof. |
| keds999 2007-10-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseHere's the link to the G.A.M sire: http://w.niji.jp/home/hey-gen/ It has all the pics from the UY original cast as well as the Married Couple of Lum and Ataru with their little girl, Mayuka. it's prety neat that they have some comics in 4 panel, and 2 panel strips, some are also in Color! As for the fic, it's pretty nice how you set things up with lots of angst from both Ataru & Lum...it's obvious he still cares for Lum, and Lum still holds a torch for Ataru. It's also pretty clear that he's figured out that he's got a kid...^^; I hope you keep writing this wonderful fic...and on an off topic, could someone translate the comic panels of the G.A.M site? |
| Midnight Star3 2007-10-05 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad that you finally updated this! It's your fic and you can name their daughter whatever name you liked. Look forward to the third chapter and when Ataru finds out he's a father. |
| Chibi 2007-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWrite more please it really is a great concept |
| Lance Menard 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseAnd I just realized you had no way to contact me because I submitted my review without logging it... -_-' Anyways my email address is fisherwilton at hotmail please reply |
| Lance Menard 2007-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... Amazing... Are there going to be more chapters? Also I've heard of this "G.A.M." site but I have absolutely no idea where it is so could you give me a link or directions on how to find it? I can practically visualize the story. This should be animated. My visual gets pause though at the grammar mistakes but thats just cause I'm one of those people who are weird about that. It's really no big deal, I can easily go on to enjoy this wonderful chapter. ^_^ Please reply soon. |
| Screaming Dean 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAtaru as a cop? That's pretty interesting. I'm glad I read this. If you have some time check out some of my Ranma fanfics. I think you'll like them. |
| Midnight Star3 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a pretty good story so far. I do think Ataru should meet his daughter. It would also be sweet if in the end Lum and Ataru would make up and get back together. Look forward to the next chapter. |