Lady Chette, let me say this, your story is abslolutely beutiful.
You picked up a very dramatic but truly possible event that could happen in the future of Ataru and Lum.
The very dramatic, scary,but even warm and comforting scenes that come out from your sentences were very involving and fantastic.
It's a real shame that the story is incomplete.
Still, I can feel the story would be ended in happy ending, I'd love to see it but now, over a year after this last updating, I very much doubt that.
If you ever want to contradict me, I'll be very happy.
For now, vey compliment for the chapters.

WRITE MORE :G

OMG DOO IT
IM GONNA ISPLODE!
NOOES YOU CANT JUST STOP THERE!
COME ONN!

this is really good. I'd love to see more of your work.
and i can really pickture this happening. ^_^

MAZING. FREAKING AMAZING.
I love it teh ideas nice.

What can I say? It's really touching. Your FF (fanfic) made me cry. I will gave you not 5 stars, but 10 STARS! for this touching and masterpiece FF.
Please continue this.

RagingPriest
"An AtaruxLamu and UY crazy fan"

AWESOME! i love where's this story is going. i hope u add another chapter cause u really left is as a cliffhanger. lol cant wait :)

Not a flicker of disappoint. GREAT STORY. CELEBRATE.
Update Soon!

wa ., you should totally update this one., haha., uhm albeit the grammar errors slowed me down a bit.. its still good ^_^ yeah i like it

I love it! Please update! :D

You know what sucked for me while I was reading chapter 2? I hadn't noticed this but I scrolled to the point where the bottom was the last line of the chapter so when I was finishing that line I went to scroll down and THERE WAS NO MORE T_T

In other words, I liked it ^_^ hope to see more.

Out of curiosity, how many chapters do you think there'll be? My anxiety is going through the roof.

Here's the link to the G.A.M sire:

http://w.niji.jp/home/hey-gen/

It has all the pics from the UY original cast as well as the Married Couple of Lum and Ataru with their little girl, Mayuka. it's prety neat that they have some comics in 4 panel, and 2 panel strips, some are also in Color!

As for the fic, it's pretty nice how you set things up with lots of angst from both Ataru & Lum...it's obvious he still cares for Lum, and Lum still holds a torch for Ataru. It's also pretty clear that he's figured out that he's got a kid...^^; I hope you keep writing this wonderful fic...and on an off topic, could someone translate the comic panels of the G.A.M site?

I'm glad that you finally updated this! It's your fic and you can name their daughter whatever name you liked. Look forward to the third chapter and when Ataru finds out he's a father.

Write more please it really is a great concept

And I just realized you had no way to contact me because I submitted my review without logging it... -_-'

Anyways my email address is fisherwilton at hotmail

please reply

Wow... Amazing... Are there going to be more chapters?

Also I've heard of this "G.A.M." site but I have absolutely no idea where it is so could you give me a link or directions on how to find it?

I can practically visualize the story. This should be animated. My visual gets pause though at the grammar mistakes but thats just cause I'm one of those people who are weird about that. It's really no big deal, I can easily go on to enjoy this wonderful chapter. ^_^

Please reply soon.

Ataru as a cop? That's pretty interesting. I'm glad I read this. If you have some time check out some of my Ranma fanfics. I think you'll like them.