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Reviews For: Lost Story

The Tiny Pea
2007-09-11
ch 1,
abuseYour writing is still very good. I'm liking the detail you put into this chapter. At the moment, I can't see anything wrong with the chapter, grammatical or otherwise, so keep up the good work!
Tristan-the-Dreamer
2007-08-10
ch 1,
abuseFlame Rising, everyone should be free to express their opinion. However, this does not mean that they have to use harsh language or be rude and mean about it. It's not right, what you said.

~Tristan
Ace31592
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseSorry, sorry.I don't have a review.I can't send PMs currently.Do you have AIM or MSN messenger?If you don't, I'll send the link when I get the chance.
Loki 7000
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story.
Kitala
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseI like the start. Ahh- frustrated Adrian at the end, I take it? *giggles*
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