I finally got a chance to read it! About time! I really, really enjoyed it, and found the references very interesting as religion is a subject that I know little about.

Your writing is still very good. I'm liking the detail you put into this chapter. At the moment, I can't see anything wrong with the chapter, grammatical or otherwise, so keep up the good work!

Flame Rising, everyone should be free to express their opinion. However, this does not mean that they have to use harsh language or be rude and mean about it. It's not right, what you said.

~Tristan

Sorry, sorry.I don't have a review.I can't send PMs currently.Do you have AIM or MSN messenger?If you don't, I'll send the link when I get the chance.

Awesome story.

I like the start. Ahh- frustrated Adrian at the end, I take it? *giggles*