Hi, your writing is good and the story is good too, I find it kind of funny; but there are some mistakes like “Of course it’s a guy Ino-Pig! I knew coming here was a mistake I’m leave!” Sakura stormed out.'

wow that was great is therre a squel?

*sob* So adorably...*sob sob* cute!
You really like Yuffie, huh? ;3

Err... did gaara actually hope that it will happen?
neeways Nice chappie!
and I guess correct! yay!

I had a pretty good guess... but still weren't sure... I shall find out soon enough shan't I

Okay, you don't have to continue, but could you at least fix those errors, they are getting on my nerves, I got all confused and that's hard to do when I'm reading.

My interest has been piqued and I am highly anticpating the direction the story is going to go in

I think you made a wise choice. This story wouldn't have made it that far without a little excitement. I think you should stick to stories that are a little more to the anime and manga.

Okay,I'm not trying to convince you to keep writing a story you lost intreast in,but it would be awsome to know what happened and what the baby was.byezezez.

♥ i loved the story. im not asking for you too continue but if you ever regain interest... =D lol anyway good story i had fun reading it!!

wonderfull just wonderful

cool story i like it

I really liked this even if it was a short story :)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...finish the story it is a really good story.

WHAT> YOU STOPPED IT. You cant jsut stop a story that people like.