then please please please keep obssessing to your heart's content, until you write a narusasunaru lemon to dazzle us all... embracing dreams is one of the best fics I've ever read (;

oh please continue!
I really love this story. I can't wait till naru is really going to use all that stuff on sasuke. I prefer Narusasu to Sasunaru, it's just more fun with naruto and kyuby topping and teasing sasuke.

Pretty good work.
(sry for my bad english)
and please hurry up and continue.

OMG! I just love this story!! It has a classic blend of romance, comedy, and silly antics! I couldn't stop laughing! It was hysterical!! I hope there's
another chapter! That was the best SasuNaru fanfic I've read in a long time! Keep up the good work

yay! You write great erotic, so i guess actual porn would be damn well-written, too. I'm all giddy over this, since I just read Embracing Dreams, and loved it. (had my freaky moments where I thought you were writing Naruto-Sue, but you proved me wrong, thankfully)

So, yeah, I'd appreciate a continuation to this. "Tentative" and "teenage hesitant-horny" are moods you portray really well

oh my gosh, continue it!
So... how about that second chapter?

Oh man, Kakashi's in for it once the vacation's over. I love how Naruto tries to loosen Sasuke up with drinks, haha. His super metabolism is so unfair. I really hope you continue this! Perhaps we'll see Sasuke as a dominatrix in no time. XD

~fd97

plez continue its so hot

This was a good exploration of their (and Kyuubi's) relationship. Now the continuation I'd like to see is Sasuke trying to kill Kakashi once the vacation is over.

Livi

For the sake of us yaoi fan girls everywhere continue please? I really enjoyed this.

Loved it, and would love the continuation too! *wink wink*

That was very harsh to leave it off there is all I have to say. All that build up, too. Haha. No, I understand about the lemon thing. I remember starting off and writing lemon after lemon, but I never enjoyed it much. Now I haven't written a full-out lemon in... probably almost a year as well. Now I like all that gooey semi-softcore stuff. But I don't mind hardcore if it's good and different than the other ones out there.

What a kinky hotel. I have never seen a hotel like that. Like even heard anyone talk about one, but I assume they're out there.

Man though, Naruto's internal dialogues with kyuubi always wear me out for some reason. It's so fun when Sasuke realizes they're talking. Eep. I spoiled myself though in terms of Embracing Dreams, but at least this way I know they end up together.

okay, i thought this was funny, and some people might think my saying that is perverted, but that's just how i am.

and i really think that you should write either a KyuuSasu or a NaruSasu lemon. i beg you to write either a NaruSasu or KyuuSasu lemon!

You really should write a lemon. I know you'll write a good one.. because leaving us off right there is just cruel. It was JUST getting hot too!

fck...y did u end it right there? that is a horrible cliffhanger...'exceeds expectations' though...

I demand a KyuuSasu lemon. Or narusasu lemon. either one. with sasUKE as the bottom. yes.

I love this series, and I can't wait til u write their first time. Narusasu? =D