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| Alycea 2008-08-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseVery good you need to write more please |
| UzumakiNasadi 2008-07-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat fic, can't wait for more:D |
| SilverwingsJP 2007-12-27 ch 3,  | abuseI like it! It's quite different and interesting. I hope you update soon :) |
| Silverwolf1212 2007-12-17 ch 3, | abuseOmg! This story just keeps getting better and better! Update soon! |
| Obsession No Es Amor 2007-10-02 ch 3, | abuseokay so at first i was like -eh- i need something to read so lets give this a try and i actually liked it! up-date soon! can't wait to see what happens next! |
| 66XANDER66 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abuseWhoa this is a great story even though my friend thougth it was nasty I liked for me love is blind of age plz update |
| I am the Bane of my Sword 2007-07-22 ch 3, | abuseuse some killing intent or something... youve twisted all the naruto characters beyond anything recognizing... If I replaced those names with random names from other series, then they would still make sense... |
| Zero Asakura 2007-06-27 ch 3, | abusesomething good well... i was thinking about Sasuke and Yumi being seen in something "innapropiate" or apparently, so, rumors spread, and we get to see Tsunade talking to Sasuke about it or maybe Naruto overreacting good luck and try to update soon! |
| Elric-Chan 2007-06-27 ch 3, | abuseThis chapter just made me wanna giggle. It seems like Sasuke's letting go of his sensei boundaries... it's nice. More, please! (And I hope Naruto catches them doing something naughty and kicks Sasuke's ass lol) ~Elric~Chan |
| Elric-Chan 2007-06-18 ch 2, | abuseGah! That Sasuke and his perverted thoughts! More please, more! ~Elric-Chan |
| Zero Asakura 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abusewell this story look's like it's worth a shot just add in a bit the others ones, (shikamaru, Ino), and maybe younger ones (Hanabi, etc ) go for it! well, later |
| Elric-Chan 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow... I really want to read this. Please continue, I'm very interested. I like how you made Naruto and Sakura more mature, and how they are together with their new baby. It makes for a great story. I'll be eagerly waiting! ~Elric-Chan |