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   kehwie 4/21/12 . chapter 7"She'd known when she'd gotten involved with Daniel that there were a lot of things she'd yet to learn about him. He was one large book with all the chapters and pages all out of whack, upside down, in the wrong order, and then to top it off no two parts were ever written in the same language." This might just be the best description of Daniel I've ever read. :) |
| Nemea 7/30/08 . chapter 10 Hey! I really enjoyed reading this series! All different scenarios were very well written and very much in character. Great work! Me also being and old Backstreet Boys fan, I was happy being reminded of their music and starting to listen to them again :-) Thanks! And now I'm gonna go and have a look at your other storys - there's a few of them so I'll be busy for a while... Cheers, Nemea |
| Nemea 7/30/08 . chapter 4 Lvoed this one! An would really like to see the photo ... :-) |
| Nemea 7/30/08 . chapter 1 Goosebumps... |
| sylvane 5/1/08 . chapter 4 sweet scene...though a bit unrealistic (did you see 'memento mori'?). nevertheless...while i'm sure vala could have easily rescued herself, this way it made for a really nice d/v moment. let's just pretend she was so shaken up about their fight that all her self-defence instincts suddenly disappeared... so daniel could come to the rescue... btw: while reading this, i just couldn't get one picture from 'continuum' out of my head: daniel with a gun... sigh... (if you're curious you can check it out at w . gateworld movies / images / 03_30 . jpg . shtml) |
| xxDark-Elfxx 6/23/07 . chapter 10 Hm. How many times have I told you I love your stories today? Oh, well, add another one to the pile. Lvoe this. |
| ilna 6/18/07 . chapter 10 Great ending! |
| ilna 6/18/07 . chapter 9 Ooh, that was good, very good |
| ilna 6/18/07 . chapter 8 Oh, that was great - I love that they waited |
| ilna 6/18/07 . chapter 5 "okie dokie" - I laughed out loud at that - very fun entry |
| ilna 6/18/07 . chapter 4 Awh - "all that matters is what's inside is still intact" - very sweet - though I think Vala could've taken the guy :) |
| BkWurm1 6/9/07 . chapter 1 DV makes me happy too. I love reading about Daniel's lighter side. Love how he is sharing his emotional treasures, things he holds dear, with Vala. |
| starjems88 6/8/07 . chapter 10 loved it! |
| starjems88 6/8/07 . chapter 9 wow, almost had me crying too. |
| Octarina4eva 6/8/07 . chapter 10 Aww... its over! Love this fic... and all your other stuff. You've captured them so well its... awesome. love it. |
