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xXxErikahxXx 10/5/07 . chapter 1
I'm in love with this.

I'm going to have to come back and read the rest later, when I have time.

You're good.

You're damn good.
SG1 Animal 8/23/07 . chapter 6
Very cute! Loved the ending!
Thara June 7/2/07 . chapter 6
Great story!

I love to think about them having done something like that when they were "beneath the surface" ... ;-)

THX

Thara
LuSo 6/24/07 . chapter 6
Aw lovely, great ending to a really good story :)
froggy0319 6/22/07 . chapter 6
Wonderful ending :)
kinnik72 6/20/07 . chapter 6
Well done.
CanonAntithesis 6/20/07 . chapter 6
Wonderful ending; thank you for sharing
Natters 6/20/07 . chapter 6
sweet
stusue 6/19/07 . chapter 6
I love the "sappy, shippy, cute and fluffy ending", but I just wish you'd drawn it out a little longer so that I got to read more of your fic. :o( It was just all over so soon...

I would have loved more chapters in between the last one and this one, with lots of detail of all the things you mentioned in this one ... how Sam and Jack adjusted to a life together with the twins, so different to their life up until that point; how Jack adjusted to staying at home while Sam went back to work; the wedding; the birth; the kids growing from babies to toddlers; etc. And I would have loved to read lots more about the two adorable twins...

I'm sorry there's not going to be more of this fic to read, but I did love the happy ending! :o)
ALIMOO1971 6/19/07 . chapter 6
great chapter please post some more soon
Natters 6/19/07 . chapter 5
chuckle
Natters 6/19/07 . chapter 4
snicker. love the sam/jake/selmac interaction
Natters 6/19/07 . chapter 3
poor sam. poor jack
Natters 6/19/07 . chapter 2
good chapter
LuSo 6/18/07 . chapter 5
Post faster, please, i have been looking forward to this chapter since i finished reading chapter four. I can't wait!
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