 WatsonandMary4ever 4/10/09 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 Eria 12/16/05 . chapter 1I think you could add one more chapter about how they grew up right before the saga started and such. p but this is excellent as a stand-alone too. I love your fanfiction! It's very well-thought out! . kudos *tosses chocolate sprinkles* |
 dreamWinger 6/30/05 . chapter 1nice story
keep updating, please!
one more thing, please keep updating Of Hidden Truths
thx! |
 jedi keliam kenobi 7/18/04 . chapter 1 that was really good. poor luke and leia.:( i think you should write more. |
 Master Solo 10/30/02 . chapter 1 This is a great fic! |
 JediVegeta18 11/4/01 . chapter 1 Awww! I loved it! I always liked these stories...I HATE Anakin for going to the dark side and leaving Padme! Ok..hate is strong...i don't like! Hmmm...great job KOD...heehee...nice name :D Ja! |
 Twinnie 7/27/01 . chapter 1This fic is very beautiful, full of feelings and such *sigh* waw... waw, waw, waw. So cute too *teary eyes*
This seems to work well all by itself, I really don't think a sequel is necessary. The end is enough, it links that fic to the OT ) |
 Blue Moon 7/23/01 . chapter 1 Oh wow. I mean, wow. This fic actually changed the temperature in my house to zero. Technically 99% perfect, and the actual story is wonderful. I mean it. |
 Eos 7/22/01 . chapter 1That was really sweet...and sad... Just the way I imagined the scene as well. A little more dialogue between Obi-wan and Padmé would have been great, although I know that there was no more to say... *sobs* |
 The Fink 7/20/01 . chapter 1Nicely done. It might be interesting to see where they go from here - tell the stories of the twins' journeys from Theed to Tantooine and Alderaan - but even if you don't this will still rank as one of the nicest stories I've read in a long time. |
 ozzy 7/18/01 . chapter 1 ozzy |
 mvdiva 7/17/01 . chapter 1I liked it. The idea of newborns forming a force bond is interesting. |
 Padawan Jan-AQ 7/17/01 . chapter 1I like it. I really do. :) Nice way to show what might happen.. keep writing! :) |
 JJ 7/17/01 . chapter 1 Very good fic, poor baby Luke. |
 mishi 7/17/01 . chapter 1 It's great as it is. Good work! Very touching. |