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Reviews For: The River

Atlantima
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseYou rock out loud.
krystelvampire
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abusei have nothing to say.
AmZ
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseMight have been funny.
LesMisLoony
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abuseOkay, so it's a story based on a one-liner. Those aren't easy to pull off. Perhaps if you had written this as though it would be a serious piece (ie making it the same length as a story) and finally ending abruptly with the joke, it would have been funny.
Ithilmir
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThough I hate to sound repetitive, I really think this should have been marked up as humour or parody. If it was meant to be something of a parody, then possibly you should consider extending the piece? What have is a little short and somewhat confusing.
Sythar
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuseAt the very least tag this as humour please. Though I, for one, fail to see the joke.
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