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| Atlantima 2007-09-16 ch 1,  | abuseYou rock out loud. |
| krystelvampire 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abusei have nothing to say. |
| AmZ 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseMight have been funny. |
| LesMisLoony 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOkay, so it's a story based on a one-liner. Those aren't easy to pull off. Perhaps if you had written this as though it would be a serious piece (ie making it the same length as a story) and finally ending abruptly with the joke, it would have been funny. |
| Ithilmir 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThough I hate to sound repetitive, I really think this should have been marked up as humour or parody. If it was meant to be something of a parody, then possibly you should consider extending the piece? What have is a little short and somewhat confusing. |
| Sythar 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseAt the very least tag this as humour please. Though I, for one, fail to see the joke. |