What happen next?

I really like this story please continue it :) i want to know what happens!

hi
please continue ur story , i think it will be wonderful

waiting for updates

You LIVE!! And so does the story!! ^_^ It's really cute how Sasuke messed up on on "obnoxious", lol. "Sasuke, stop making that face dear, it’s so unbecoming of your cuteness." I love this quote by the way it made me laugh so hard! XD I also enjoyed how Hinata and her father get along when there's no one watching, but I feel sorry for Hinata when he pushes her away whenever there is someone near them. *tear* And also the whole 'the apple of her father’s eye' thing was sweet.

Why do the Hyuugas seem so spiteful towards the Uchihas? Arn't they distant relatives? And Ryo-san just called Hinata by her name without any horrific (is that a typo I don't remember it that is spelled right.) Since the guard just called Hinata by her name does that mean he's close to her?

"This house is full of self hatred, Fugaku." Is this a foreshadowing of both the Hyuuga and Uchiha clan? Or is it for something else? You do not have to tell me if it spoils the plot, lol.

Oh, and this is still me 'SilentAbyss' my friend asked me why I wasn't using my account when I told her I was reviewing a lot under and anonymous name. I forgot all about it. -.-; Curse my 5-second memory!! So I changed my old name to this one. But one thing is for sure the search engine is a LIER!! It said my name was already taken when I went to edit it. There is no name like mine. I checked. *grumbles* I didn't want to put any additions to my name, but I didn't want to change it either cause I already reviewed to a bunch of people. But I had to put additions in the end. -.- *sigh* Oh, well I guess this gives me the chance to put you in my "Favorites"! ^_^ Please update when plot bunnies attack! XD

SilentAbyss

P.S.-Will you by any chance be putting back G.G. I've been wanting to draw Gaara and Hinata's encounter in the forest, as well as Hinata's encounter with the Uchiha wolf. I just noticed you use wolf as a symbol for Sasuke a lot. I like it! But I was just wondering. It was a great story. I wonder if I can talk my mom into buying me a scanner *thinks*

Ooh, me like. Kinda humorous and really cute. I'm liking it so far and I can't wait to see what happens after this. Self hatred; she's talking about the feud between the main and branch houses I bet. Though why was she so...reluctant to let Sasuke go on off to the garden?

Interesting and please continue! XD

update soon, your story is very interesting!! ^-^

AYA ! They are so CUTE ! just by reading it, I want to cuddle Hinata ... (or sorry for mypoor english ... too lazy to look for the good word, sorry !)

o! good! keep it up!

ah!! you finally updated. its been so long but thanks for updating anyways. it was short but i still liked it. I really like the last part when you wrote " This house is full of self hatred... Hate is colder than snow..." That was really great. I really like your style of writing. Anyway please update again soon. ja

Again I review and Sasuke is mean, poor Hina! I hope she gets to BEAT him MUHAHAHAHA she needs revenge after he stabbed her anyways. Hope there's more stuff coming up. Oh, and if you do see like a bunch of reviews coming from me in every story and like rereading them to freshen up my memory, to show my support, cause I didn't review before xp (shame on me), and cause of the insomnia thing I'm suffering from -.- but keep up the good work!

This seems more gritty and the events leading to the apparent demise of Hinata already happened. So I am guessing the rest of the chps will explain how this outcome happened? It's ironic that he called her traitor since from the anime timeline he left konoha to train under Orochimaru unless this story will follow a different tangent into a AU story line. Much faster pace since it appears they are adults now so the childhood part may possibly be skipped or briefly glossed over as a flashbacks? or not. So far this chp catches attention. Can't wait to read more and read where this is going.

Wow... Very intense. I love how descriptive you are and I can almost feel the emotions the two are experiencing (although, admittedly, not the 'knife in the gut' part.) :)

I'm very curious as to what the 'traitor' allegation made by Sasuke is about and what their past relationship was like.

The last line is beautifully done and fits the atmosphere very well. Very ominous.

The paragraph in which Sasuke says he hates traitors has a few odd tense changes, though, and that kind of messes with the flow of the story, but otherwise, I love it. I'm looking forward to more!

Poor Hinata...just what had she done to deserve that??

Pls update soon!

That's really amazing for a prologue. The suspense is killing me, I hope that you update soon.

Wow, this was truely grusome, yet I think it was beautiful. Poor Hinata ;_; but she must have pissed sasuke off to dye like that *_*. Cant wait to see what happens next. keep the wicked work up~