This is a great beginning. I enjoyed the dialogue. I'd like to see where this is headed.

Well that was...interesting, lol Although I'm not surprised to think Bonnie and Shego would treat each other like that, once one of them is terribly drunk of course.
Well written chapter, I can't wait to see where you're taking them later on :)

I've seen this at various stages of development and appreciate the way you are trying to deepen the psychological elements of the story.

KiY

Pretty lame review. Sorry about that. Trying to write questions for a Death essay test I'm giving and took a break to read this.