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Reviews for: Tasuki and the River Bandits
MMaru
2007-06-18 . chapter 1
Aiee, I read this before and didn't review! Bad Maria! This is a great story so far, and the writing is excellent. You've come a long way with your writing! Good job!
Star Dragonmaiden
2007-06-09 . chapter 1
This is cute, Annie! I can't wait to see where you take this.
Adelaide MacGregor
2007-06-08 . chapter 1
Good job! I knew Bikky right away! haha! Forgot Jaimie was in there so I was like--two blondes? huh? Oh well! Good job, only found one big problem grammatically with this sentence: "Where another member of the sympathetically, be the sympathy real or feigned on couldn’t tell, rubbed her should." I think I know what you were trying to say...but it didn't come out right...lol.
puppy444219
2007-06-08 . chapter 1
*laughs* Awesome...hehe...Tasuki amuses me XD Update Soon Please!
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