 Adelaide MacGregor 2007-06-08 . chapter 1Good job! I knew Bikky right away! haha! Forgot Jaimie was in there so I was like--two blondes? huh? Oh well! Good job, only found one big problem grammatically with this sentence: "Where another member of the sympathetically, be the sympathy real or feigned on couldn’t tell, rubbed her should." I think I know what you were trying to say...but it didn't come out right...lol. |