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Bleach Girl 2008-06-22 ch 6, anon.	abuseFor some reason, tears started welling up D: This was such a dark fic...I loved it so much! But, I can't get this feeling off of my back. I'm kind of stuck on the: "Because you haven't died yet." And I can't love you when you're alive. Part...Sorry. I was about to tear my head apart. Loved it!
LoveCarriesmyEntireWorld 2008-01-23 ch 4,	abuseThe scream she emits causes Ulquiorra to rush to her side, beckoning her to lie back down. She does not respond but continues to tremble as words and images continue to attack and intrude her mind. Forcibly, he pushes her down into the futon and her frantic movements make a grab at him in order to pull him down on top of her. Her fear stops instantly and she is left in a motionless realm of feeling. His nose is beside her cheek and his breath upon her shoulder, his hand is hard pressed into the space beside her head and the length of him is up against her own I love that part! I felt like my heart was racing lol I love Ulqihime momments in this chapter.. lol I am only on chapter 4 so I still have to read the rest, but so far I love your writing style and how you describe their surroundings. Good job. Keep it up. “I kidnapped you.” She laughs. He stays silent. “Oh…you’re serious.” lol I would have felt awkard too Hime.
LoveCarriesmyEntireWorld 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuse"Do you want to dance?" "I don't dance" "hmm" LOL poor Chad =D.. I luff him though. Actually the beginning was not even bad at all. I quite enjoy reading it.. I felt bad for Ichigo though.. He so lonely huggles him Keep it up =D ..you have a good mind!!
Rag Daz the Spaz Kat 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseI really don't think it's a crappy beginning at all. I can't believe I haven't read this one yet! SO glad I found it. It's wonderful. :) Keep up the great work!
Majestically Mystical 2007-11-04 ch 6,	abuseThis was wonderful. I can feel the insanity... Nice characterization, and lovely imagery.
DoodleNoodle-no-baka 2007-10-30 ch 6,	abuseI loved it! And the perspective from Orihime's thoughts and feelings were simply brilliant! I look forward to your next UquiHime fic!
Rawr4cookies 2007-10-30 ch 6,	abuseI'm so...confused. yet SO in love. because this chapter was so chaotic yet so-unnerving and showing the inner workings of I guess Orihime and Ulquiorra. “Because you haven’t died yet.” And I can’t love you when you’re alive. i thought that was simply fantastic. sad to see it end
Aldalena 2007-10-29 ch 6,	abuseSobs Ulquiorra, where are yoouu?! T^T Damn you, Grimmjow!! Glares Anyway... Good chapter! ^^ But... I'm...a bit confused... o_O' And I have writer's block. I started an UlquiHime fic and I don't know whether to do a series of drabbles or longer chapters or what...! Ahem So...please update soon?? And hope my writer's block goes away... -_-;
nazzy and jerkez 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI DON'T CARE IF MY SISTER WILL KILL ME 'CAUSE I AM REVIEWING ON A STORY, 'CAUSE I SIMPLY LUFFED IT !! whoa, THAT was funny to write/type, lol. The storyline is REALLY good, and I love how you describe things and stuff, REALLY GOOD! UlqiHime is the best pairing in the whole Bleach series (with an exception of HitsuKarin, but anyway...) and GAh, it was .. perfect. Awesome. Brilliant. BEST! I'm off reading the other chapters!
pinklillies 2007-10-25 ch 5, anon.	abuseI love this! you need to continue and update right now, you've made me a ulquihime fan! I really love how ulwui has come back to her and is helping her to regain her memories, but i wish the fluff would be taken up a notch :wink, wink:
Aldalena 2007-10-14 ch 5,	abuseI swear I'd reviewed this...! o.o Anyway, hiya!! It's me, JustAnotherAnimeFan aka Aldalena!! ^w^ How's ya doin?? X3 When are you going to update? Update?! Update!! Please?! o Okay, I'm not making any sense... So, nice story! ^_^ UlquiHime is CANON!! :D No, really, wouldn't it be an interesting twist if Kubo Tite-sama made UlquiHime truly official?? :D
FanofInulover 2007-10-08 ch 5,	abuseA simply inspiring chapter. Sorry for taking so long to review, I was caught up in real life, but coming back to your writing is always a pleasure. I absolutely loved it, except for one thing. You always cut it off when its getting so darn good. sO NEXT TIME. make things longer. please and update right about now.
Rawr4cookies 2007-09-26 ch 5,	abusesimply amazing but you should def. make the chapters longer, start showing some fluff, too.
Dreaming One 2007-09-20 ch 5,	abuseHey babe! It's a good update! ^_^ My life's gone crazy right now, so I can't give a super crazy detailed review, but this chapter seemed more readable to me than some of the others. I like that you have a roundabout, cryptic style, but I do want to reiterate that a bit of simplicity goes a long way. It's all about giving your readers a visual, and it's easier to see what a writer is writing when it's written simply. That doesn't mean without ~style~--style is fab, and you've got a great one! It just means that you should always read over what you've written, possibly out loud, and double check to see if you could make anything more clear. You don't want your readers having to read things twice just to get what you're saying. This is important! (depending on who you ask...I think it's important, because I think reading is for the reader as much as the writer. You're totally free to disagree!) The best way to improve readability of what you write, is to read, btw. But apparently it takes a while, because I've been reading forever and my writing still isn't fabulous, lol. You probably read all the time, don't you? I get that impression. I think you have the soul of a poet. ^_^ Also, be careful when switching timeframes. It's cool, but make sure you keep the storyline increasing in drama and interest. You're doing that pretty well I'd say, because we're all waiting to see if Orihime and Ulquiorra are going to end up together, run off or somethign, or if she'll get angry and turn against him, or if Ichigo is going to do something drastic. Personally, as a reader, I want to know exactly what happened between the two of them! I want to watch them fall in love, and then I want to know what will happen next. ^_^ Just so you know. Your other readers probably feel the same way. Update soon my friend! ~May
ForbiddenEmotion 2007-09-20 ch 5,	abuseThe darkness and angsty relationship that you portray for them is breathtaking. I am actually beginning to admit that I like this couple and may even one day due to your influences and this story I might support them wholeheartedly. This was an absolutely gorgeous chapter. I cant wait to see more of Ulquihime from you Cassandra! I love it! Chickenpox

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