And here I was thinking people didn't care about Care Bears anymore... [: I love this idea for a story, maybe will write one of my own. I do love the temptation aspect of it. I'm going to read some of your other stories as well.

My only criticism of this story was that, to me, it felt rushed. It was good for just a quick read, yay, loved it. But if you were aiming for an actual story with good substance, it could have had more. In my opinion, this would have fared better as that. But that's only if you were aiming for that. Christy seemed kinda... bi-polar, too. And when she gladly accepted the flowers, that seemed out of character, since she'd already figured out something was wrong. Unless he'd put some sort of spell on her.

I dunno. But anyway, I still loved it. ^^

--Hollyanne

I really liked the temptation aspect you integrated in the story. It's easy to believe someone like Dark Heart would go back to the way he was even after having been saved. I thought their interactions were on par with the canon set by the movie. Great job! :)

I like the elements of romance, and old temptation in this story. This has a touch of realism that no matter how successful your life is, unless you truly deal with the issues of your past, it will always have a way of sucking you back in. Good fic!

Ahahaha, aww. You have to be on a care bear kick to really enjoy these kind of things. I would have loved to see this elaborated on and multi chaptered, but it's still really good. Nice job for a dream.

I always loved the idea of Kevin and Christy getting together after that movie, there was so much 'potential' to these two characters. I'm really glad you wrote it, because I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Wonderful idea and a good effort there.