Amazingly great read. This is what I would sincerely hope would be the fate of Xellos, Filia and Val.

Your Xel/Filia fics are simply astounding, but I never thought I would see a fic centered around Val and Xellos! And this is EPIC on so many scales! Everything from the main plot to the little twists, from the characters to the dialogue, from the writing in general to the clever, and I dare say insightful, use of verbal substitutes for forbidden words! Clever clever clever! Oranges, nothing but oranges! XD

Are you considering a career in writing? Because dang, you will go far! Keep writing!!

I LOVED this fic! XD It was truly awesome! XD

YAY! Filia's awake! XD

NO! O,O

Another great chapter! XD

AW! X3

OMG! When Xel threatened to vomit on Amelia's food and make her eat it with ketchup...CLASSIC! XD

NO! Poor Xel! Poor Val! Poor Filia!

I must say that your writing style is WONDERFUL! I'm still loving this fic! XD

SO sweet! I loved this! X3

Ya know, the word 'aww' sums up this story quite nicely. It was sweet and I enjoyed it. Can't think of any constructive criticism so I leave you with a job well done.

that was definately one of the best things that i have read for a long time well done indeed bravo

Great STory, when you've read both parts^^
I Love it, naugh to say
Seeyasayo

WONDERful job! I enjoyed reading every minute of this!