This is a very well writen and thought out story, I applaud you! as to the romance scenes, try imagining what you would do if you were in that situation with someone you love.

I absolutly love your story cant wait till next sequel. I am a big marron man so its great to read a fic that gives him a good paring since i think he deserves better than gateua. Hope the next part is up soon.

waiwaiwai i cant wait for teh next oen hurry onegi! * grisn hopefully*

Very good. Please continue!