This great story and the wonderful sequel just doesn't have enough reviews
Love how you made it so realistic... and the attention to details..
Hope there's more to come

I loved the chance here to meet the "Firefly" cast "in person" as Bumblebee does as I am also a fan and I think it is a lovely idea . Your characterization of Jazz and Bumblebee is very good and I love your 'verse - a grat compromise on the situation if you can't make a separate nation of Tfs and Tf lovers a bit like Robots in Dis guise by sending them in secret to Japan for instance. I love the bet situation too -my friend and i run a "who gets laid first" bet in our rp verse but this is the first "who pulls- or gets laid by- a human chick first" bet I've seen. Good show!

Aw! I really love your writing style and I am loving Mitzi! You've fleshed her out and given her complete past and present in a little over 5,0 words! I really feel for her and (once again) can't wait till the next chapter (I hope there is one soon!)

Wow! That was amazing! Very well written (and very hot I might add), just fantastic! ^_^ Love how it ended, I was trying not to burst out laughing (especially seeing it's after midnight) I can't wait to read the next chapter!

that was so sweet. a good telling of the concepts that would confuse a transformer about dealing with a human, the ones that are easily comparable, and the ones that are the same. plus a good account of the parts of autobot life that would make a relationship with a human difficult (red alert! *grin*).

good to see you post.

E! This one didn't go on your LJ at all! (or did it and I just totally missed it??)

I never reviewed the first chapter, but I remember it was part of my introduction to the idea of Transformers/Human smut. It's still as drool-worthy now as it was then.

I'm _really_ glad that you updated this!

I love how Mitzi rambles on (so like a female XD) in her letters to Bee. Does he ramble just as much, you never gave us a sample of his email. ;P I wanted to cry with Mitzi when her Grandmother passed away. Good job for something that takes such a short space of the chapter. I also liked how 'Bee had to keep interpreting her words, it's a nice change from him knowing them on the spot because Spike.

It's good to see you updating again!

awesome story! Probably the best human/transformer get together I've read. I'm not usually a fan of OC's but the ones you write are so well done. They don't even seem like OC's.
I love all of your stories :P
Just one question, what did Bumblebee mean by Seaspray not telling anyone else?

That was...disturbing and highly interresting at the same time. Very creative. :)

That.Was.Wow.
Do it again. More.

This was a good story! I loved it!

That was really sexy and funny and excellent.
Yay for the nerdy ass sisterhood! Where did you get such a varied knowledge of Autobot...umm, anatomy?

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Mort

That was incredible! The realism and phantasmal sensual imagery were just so darn believable! All my senses were provoked! Awesome job!

(grins) You don't see too many ficcys like this in the TF fandom now do you? Very well written I'd say, even for two completly different species to have intercourse with each other. ^_- Great work! You just gotta love Bee. Although this scnerio would be impossible in the new movie. XD

Wow, that’s was great. Usually it tends to be the metal-to-metal passion (if you catch my drift) but now it's flesh–to metal in this fic. lol. Never read anything like that before. Nice fic.

That was good, you have that energy filter thing down really good, sounds believable to me.