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| Golden Arms 2008-10-06 ch 8, | abuseMan, this is a really good story. Shame it hasn't seen action in some time. I generally considered the jutsu elemental order to be more logical in the fact that lightning's able to instantly glass earth, and thus neutralize its effects without problem. Diverting it to the ground? Where else are you going to redirect a bolt of electricity, the bay? Though I've yet to understand how wind defeats lightning. |
| swordbunny4486 2008-10-03 ch 8, | abusewonderful |
| Ryu Vision 2008-09-23 ch 3, | abusegod... i love slayers... have seen all of the show, and own all three seasons, along with the manga and books... lol so what the pairing gonna be by the way Ryu_Vision |
| BloodxMoonxNightmare 2008-09-15 ch 8, anon. | abusethis fic is really wicked awsome! but i do have to agree with some of the reviewers on the fact that sakura does seem to chase after sasuke a bit too much, but it is your fic and we shouldn't complain because it is awsome. please update really really soon. -Akumu |
| XXXKoRukoJoJiXXX 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI like your story...please continue it...thanks |
| Sdarian 2008-08-16 ch 8, | abuseThis has been great! I really like Slayers, but it's not often that I come across a story involving them that's well written, especially one that's a crossover. Great job!! Keep up the good work!! |
| IvanAlive 2008-08-16 ch 8, | abuseItachi, Ebisu, and Zelgadis are all portrayed by Crispin Freeman. |
| Sdarian 2008-08-15 ch 5, | abuseYay Xellos! I was actually kind of expecting Lina to summon (or try to) Xellos to her when she first awoke, thinking that it might have been some trick or something that he cooked up. Keep up the good work!! |
| Nosferatum 2008-08-01 ch 7, | abuseErr, I thought of an idea, may be it deserves some consideration? Lina/Sakura already have somewhat of access to the two of greatest Mazoku of this universe. May be she/they can use this ones, hunt down others and create her own amplifiers (instead of ones she's bought from Xellos) - and even not just four, but 9-8 (with possible exception of Kyuubi)? Thus giving her the ability to call forth the power of L-sama and Ragna Blade once more without the fear of dire repercussions. |
| Nosferatum 2008-08-01 ch 8, | abuseVery good. I don't believe I've ever seen anything like this, crossover or not. Besides, given that Slayers series are one of my favorite anime, and Xellos is my favorite character ever, it just adds to the exitement. I really hope that you won't drop this fic, especially as you already have more than half of it planned :) |
| SakuraEmma29 2008-07-19 ch 8, | abuseI must say, I was pleased to find a Slayers/Naruto fanfic crossover! Slayers is what got me into anime(I watched Sailor Moon- but Lina Inverse caught my attention better!) Then to find Lina Inverse in Naruto fic awesome! I miss Gourry though! I loved the 'Jelly-fish for brains' guy! And his sword of light of course! And to imagine the Naga showing up in front of the rest of the Naruto characters would be hilarious(seriously, imagine it!) lol. great job. I see it has been forever since you have written and updated this story. I do hope you are just formulating a plan for the story! Please come back!! Lina Rocks! |
| AnImEwIlLRuLe 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseMORE! |
| Ramenth 2008-07-12 ch 8, anon. | abuseDamn; This fic appears to be abandoned. Oh well, great read for what was there. Hopefully you'll continue some day. |
| Mats Forsen 2008-07-05 ch 8, | abuseVery interesting. I hope you continue this someday. |
| Saku-chanDemon 2008-07-01 ch 4, | abuseI like omake in this chapter, can you make a story about it please? Oh, and I like this story too. |