A great story. Very good.

Ahahaha! Good story. I could totally imagine this happening. I liked the dialogue and what the Queen said was totally believable. She would so say that. I really do hate her.

Bwahahahahaha, perfect. absolutely perfect. i loved this. youve got both Jadis and Brandy down to a T.

well done - this was utterly fantastic. :)

Love Bundi

Ha ha! Oh my! You got the 'Queen' and Andrew just right in there charaters! :) Good job.
In Aslan's Name,
Queen Susan the Gentle

Delightfully funny! I can't believe it but I am actually feeling sorry for uncle Andrew!

FUUNY!

This was too, too funny! Andrew's dialogue -- my word can't praise his dialogue enough!! Jadis's was terrific too, I adored her giving her name to the maitre d'. This was so stinkin' funny. Almost like a lost chapter from the book!

This was a tad long for a oneshot, and might could've been broken into two pieces, but was such a joy to read it didn't bother me.

Honestly, this was hilarious, and so, SO IC.

Very funny, that part of the book makes me laugh and it’s great to see it in more detail. Jadis in London is hilarious, in spite (and because) of being a scary, scary person. Uncle Andrew’s reactions are perfect. “Regrettable violence” is one way of putting it.

*rolls on floor in laughter*

Regretable, most regretable. Ha ha! Oh dear, I nearly died laughing. I liked:
“The finest?” Andrew echoed. “Madam, I beseech you to suggest something else, as I don’t think I’ll be able to afford…”

The door of the jeweler shop swung open again and Smythe ran out, waving his arms. His face was red and his hair was all a mess and he looked any minute like he was going to open the door and attack them both to get his jewels back. “Stop! Stop this instant, thief! You can’t get away with my jewels!”

“Nevermind, let’s go!” Andrew shouted. “Come on, let’s hurry up before…you know, the establishment closes!”

Cracks me up. Very well written, too. I enjoyed it immensely.

Oh. My. Gosh.

I love it.

This is definitely one of my favorite Jadis fics. You hit book verse Jadis dead on, and I absolutely love it. Your portrayal of Andrew was simply outstanding, and the humor added to such a dreadful day was very well done.

-Envy

lol

What a crazy scene. Jadis and Andrew, the ultimate odd couple.

This is fantastic! The Magician's Nephew was always my favorite of the Narnia books, and there were many places in this story where I could have sworn I was reading a chapter straight from it. Your grasp of Ketterly, Jadis, and comic timing is wonderful. I'm sure that if C. S. Lewis could read this, he'd get a good laugh out of it, too.

That was incredibly good. So much better than I was expecting! You threw in so many lines that just made me burst out laughing. I loved it.

Brilliant piece of work. Jadis was very in character. Excellently written.

That's hilarious! And very in keeping with the tone of the book too. Jadis reminded me of one of those obnoxious tourists who unfavourably compares everything, everywhere to wherever they're from. And poor Uncle Andrew...