That was awesome!

HOT DAMN, YOU.

Remind me to always read everything you write. Okay? Okay. *Adds to favorites*

*Will totally add to recs list*

Ahah, I was about to beg you to post this at the Refuge, then checked and saw it was already there. Anyway. It is SO GOOD, it's both incredibly hot *and* has so much tension to it. But it doesn't need the lead-up fighting or the eventual playing out of their relationship; it's such a good snapshot. I LOVE IT.

With all caps. Indeed.

Rustie said you were good, but she didn't say that you were this good.

Great Job.

Yeah, so, um, I love this. Beautifully written, and more importantly, SMOKIN' HOT. Javid + smooching + gropage = yes please! Nice work!

Yummy. There definitely needs to be more Javid smut in this fandom. Race and Spot get it on fairly often, but it seems to me that steamy Jack and David isn't written about as often. You should definitely write more like this to fill in that hole ;).

guh. you've left me speechless, it was that good.
Seriously, that was one of the most well-written fics in this fandom, and without a doubt one of the hottest javid scenes ever written too.
I could perfectly picture this in my head, as your descriptions were vivid and amazing. :)
I loved loved loved it. Great job.
-Braids

It has been a while, six months – maybe a year - since I’ve read something that really affected me. A story so intense, with words joined so perfectly that it drew me in magnetically. It was as though I wasn’t sitting in my cheap leather chair reading a piece of fiction. Your words transported me to that precise moment in time.

If I were to list all of my favorite lines from this story, I would have to copy it and post the entire piece. It wasn’t easy, but I managed to narrow my picks to these two:

“Some combination of a moan and growl came from his lungs, and he realized that making the noise felt almost as good as what Jack was doing to cause it.”

“His eyes were on Jack, whose smile had widened into a dopey grin as he looked for the effects of his movement play across David’s face.”

If there were an award given for best story of the year, this would earn my vote.