it's been a long while since you pdated this fic, so i hope you'll be able to do it soon. it sounds like an awesome fic. naruhina isn't my favorite pairing, but i like it anyway (just think gaahina is cooler ^_^) like the name of the kat-demon

Good story!XD

You had some puncuation problems.

Also, I may speak a little Japanese but some people don't so you should add a little thing saying what each word means.

You should be careful of turning this into a stereotypical girl-gone-demon story; it seems interesting so far but it does need a little editing.

This is AWESOME.

I know what u mean by wasting your summer; school starts in four days for me! Anyway dont be so hard on yourself there are some people who dont update for like a year. I hope Hinata takes the offer.

THis is an amazing story and I can't wait to read more.

Yay, you updated! i was afraid that wouldn't update. are you gonna make it a naruhina or gaahina? please update soon.
ja ne!

ya u updated I thought u died lolz ne wayz hurry up n say yes Hinata

i like it, just wanted to let you know i was reading

WOW ** Catie you didn't no what yes is in Japanese but u...why am I here agian?... Oh yeah to review, what an awesome story KYA! Right next Chaptr or Shammpo hurt you!( pretend I said that in a squeaky chinese girl voice )
Shammpo hurt you if you no write next chapter soon!,
iloveshammpo

P.S I finally got on spread the word please,Hope to see you soon! Love shammpo ^^
P.S.S I love bill! and your right Tom is hot! Love Ya ( Not That way! )

You should add an index for all the Japanese you use. She could have said "yes" as opposed to "hai" which i had to look up because I don't know Japanese.

This might be interesting; I wouldn't know. I'm not a Narutard.

Also soome of the wording was weird. Be careful.

This is a interesting and I want to see where it goes, cant wait for the update!

Hola me amiga, yo soy Kristen... Your big sister. I'm sending you a review AND I'm going to fav. this story, because I'm NICE. Have you favored any of my stories... No... -stops rambiling-

Okay, hi. It was good, and even though I know where the plot is going, I still wanna keep reading. I also noticed that you didn't have a disclamer, and I'd put up one of those soon...

CONTINUE PLEASE!

~Water and Earth Alchemist

That was good.I think its really cute. I think she will join the academy in that year.Hope you will update soon.

A kitten?