u leave me CRAVING more

:)
So . . . sweet.
And impossibly heartbreaking.
I liked it so much!
It was a great concept, great writing!
Very good job.
:D

I confess that I'm a little in love with the ending of this piece. Stephen Wilson once said that sad songs are the most beautiful, and I find the same is often true of stories. So yeah, it's borderline schmaltzy and a tad melodramatic but so are most break-up songs, and they never seem to go out of style. I suppose the title in English would give too much away, but it is a tad bothersome that people who don't understand German (or don't know about babelfish) miss the bitter truth of it. I thought it was pretty clear, even without the title, but judging from the other reviews...maybe not. (A sequel? Seriously? Honey, how old are you?!?)

This was really sweet and sad, what does the title mean in English? Great writing. I loved your characterization of Neji and Tenten.

I hope they make it back home and live happily ever after! It was cute though!

Well-written and very insightful.

A masterpiece.

QBC

that was beautiful! but so sad. i loved it! :D great job!

aw!

This was so wonderful and amazingly written. The flow and execution of this was perfect. I love the details and imagery. Very nicely done.

aw i love the last part! XD

you should end it more clearly...suggestion.

do they die or do they live??

Beautiful... just beautiful... I loved it!

~Dreaming101

Oh. I love this. Beautiful Neji point-of-view.

No sprechen ze Deutch. what does the title mean?

That was so good! I really enjoyed that... although I would like it if you added another chapter about what happened afterwards, but never mind, that was so nice!