...well, it certainly was...dark. Not that I'm critizizing (sp?) or anything. I actually like dark or angsty fics up to a certain point. And I happen to like this one. The ending is sorta...cliffhangery...eh? But i liked it. Interesting, and i havent yet read something like this, nor do i think i ever will. But i likey.

This is my personal opinion, but just think the wind tunnel had appeared a little later after he was born, cause in the manga he said the windtunnel grew a little each year, so i think that it might begin growing after his first b-day or whatever, but i dont lnow and no one prabably will. But as i've said before, i like it.

Wow that was actually kinda cool. It explains why Miroku is an only child and why he waited so long to propose to Sango. Sad but really cool. Good job.

that's so sad

Nicely done. 5/5. I must say though, I never noticed that Miroku only touched the womens' bums with his cursed hand.

what can i say about this that makes it justice both to you as a writer and this story?, for starters that it projects the feelings, that it made me feel his despair and his curse when he should be happy and blissful, that it made me feel anger towards naraku, that i'm impressed as a fan of yours for using this spin for a story, that it was as good as your other fics.

and finally that it made me see Miroku in a different ligth.

This SERIOUSLY gives him a different look. Takahashi always that underlying darkness. You can't help but wonder when the holoe in his hand forms.

Does the baby have it in the womb or do they get it after a while? the image I go tfrom thi sstory is disturbing and and raises stuff about Miroku. It's an anime, so I won't dwell too much on it...screw it, I'm not gonna think about it AT ALL!

Nice dark take. Be sure to double check your spelling. It's "will you bear my child?" and not "will you bare my child?"

Interesting to read and all... However, could you please use the right word? Bear not bare. An eyebrow twitched each time I saw you use that wrongly.

Beautiful story. Tragic. I love Miroku, and it hurts to read about him such emotional agony. I had always wondered what happened to his mom, and this made sense. very good story.

Although I liked the story. I'm still angry at you. And I know you don't care if I'm angry at you or not but I want you to know the reason anyway. You're a terrific writer, and I REALLY look forward to whatever you write, especially those Naruto fics of yours. And then you go and do this, you create a oneshot fic instead of updating stories like "But he's just a ramen chef" which I consider one of the best stories I have ever read.

Like I said, I don't think you care what I or anyone else thinks, but I just wanted to let you know what I was thinking. Mainly because going up to you and saying "I'm a little bit angry with you right now" would make me feel like your going to come back and be all up in my face. I'm pretty sure that most of this doesn't make sense mainly because I just got out of the hospital, and no not a mental hospital. Ja Ne bud.

KN

Hurray for disturbia! WOOT! I likes dark themes. Yay.

Although part of me wants to rant about how instead of writing this, you could be working on another chapter, I can't bring myself to say it (Despite just typing it up there). It was quite good, and I hope you can continue writing, although that heavy angst there didn't really strike as your style, though you did it well. It really provided a new perspective for me on the character Miroku. And yes, I'm fairly sure he had the wind tunnel when he was born.

EGG-SALAD IS SHASTA!

This is rather sad, but very well written. Normally I wouldn't view these two as a tragic couple.

That was realy Miroku seem all depresed and scared. Interesting

Very intresting take on the reason Miroku asks his famous question. I have one complaint and that is wwhy the hell did you write a one shot when you have 8 fics to complete?

i believe miroku was born with it this is an interesting perspective although i think it grows with the person so it wouldn't kill the mother but one can never be sure i wonder if any of your other fics are good?