O-k.

To say, I have been looking at the WonderSwan thing (the real Ryo and Ken thing) Ryo's digimon was Veemon. But anyway, it was kool. But too fast, it felt like a summary.

Anyway, that was nice.

Not bad! I like your view on Ken's first trip to the Digiworld. This is the first one I've read and I'll have to read all the other ones!

Oh Chibi-Ken! *drool*

Kool...I'm always reading stories like these which are better than mine! Not fare! (pouts and runs off)

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue? I LOVE THIS! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! PLEASE CONTINUE! THIS STORY ROCKS!

NEAT! I like this a lot!

Cool beginning. I like it. I like Ryo.

Okay...good story, and I don't know of many people who write about Ryo. But there are a couple things that confuse/lose me. Ryo and Ken destroy Milleniumon...are you even going to show that? That was when Ken was infected with the Dark Seed, plus the fact that Vamdemon only infected Oikawa after his first mega form was annihalated...maybe you could clear these things up...

But, this is your own story, so write whatever you want...ja ne!

-Alt Nu

ooooh, i like this, it's quite original, and i would really like it if you hurried up with the next part

Not bad but way too short.

I personally don't see much fics with Ryo in it as he was a little-known character, but please continue your version.

That wasn't as good as the first one, but it didn;t suck terribly...keep up the nifty writing _