Maybe it's just me, but there's something magical about your poems. I especially liked the 'True Heroes'. And 'deep inside the drive' has got a nice ring to it. You're really very talented. Hope to see more soon. :)

Why did you include two poems? Anyway, God just set the stage, we do all the dioluge.

very beautiful...

I loved both of your poems. There's a lot of emotion in both, &... well... I loved it. _

*claps* Bravo! Do your wonders ever cease? I had to read it twice, then out loud. _ Very deep. I like what you added about Ray in there. Trust me, people, this is WORTH reading!

o.o. So beautiful!

It's good when I read it some of the words did't exsist but thats what poetry is all about what you feel and in poetry you can say it whatever way you want to say my answer to your poll is .

hey u wad u? well chick lilkei said b4 and am going to say again ur writting is dope i like what u wrote! i hope u some day bcome a writter like my fav. writter stephen king! cox his stoties are crazy kool and i bet u can do that to! especially cox u have alot to write about! wll gtg and keep on writting good s&* k!

alwayz ur friend,

kc

A This poem KIKZ AZZ! One of the best poems I've read on this here site! Your meter was confusing only to the point that it forced me to read it aloud. But then when I did, it sounded MAJOR cool! Anyways... I loved this poem SO MUCH, I might just write a fanfic about it... (heh heh heh)

Wow. Defintely an A It was fantastic. I have to read it over again now... keep up the good work! :)

Not good, but wonderful. This has to be the most original and creative ReBoot poem I've read. Sad and intriguing, but thank the User not sappy at all. I especially like the end: The villains, the peasants, the heroes in vain. You should try your hand at more ReBoot stuff, fics or poems.

Dude, that was beautiful. I tried to understand it, and it just soundedso deep and real. This was very good work keep it.

Very nice. Good little introspective piece. Good poetry. I like it a lot. I don't think there's much need to improve your poetry style. And it's not about Bob missing Dot/Dot missing Bob! But, great poem.

First, on the kitty face: B. Now... I really liked that poem. It was deep and unlike some things I've read - you handled the personalities of the characters very masterfully. My favorite line is: “Innocence is an illusion,” the man lies in his mind / How could a kindred boy become so stubbornly blind?