Oh my effin lord...this story...is...incredible. I was searching for a fic that would involve the characters of KH in an alternate universe, and i got it along with the most fantastically written story and plot i have gotten the opportunity to read in the longest of times. The direction this story is heading, where the two worlds seem to be merging more and more is one of the most exciting paths ive ever read in a fic. My favourite thing in any fictional story is when it involves the real world with its fantasy which is why i absolutley love this fic, its a completely realist joining of these two worlds. As a writer you have phenomanal skill, you develop the characters, the setting, the plot, the everthing, with such detail and attention that reading it becomes one of the greatest joys for anyone as these awe-inspiring life is panned out before you. In regards to the characters themselves you work with their reactions and actions perfectly, never making them surreal by having them simply accept or be calm about where their lives are heading. This story you have spun has been given a life of its own along with the characters, thanks to your talent and dedication to writting it. I desperatly hope that you will continue this story and never abandon it till its complete because it seems worse than murder to leave a universe like this uncompleted and hanging. I, along with countless other readers, will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter to be able to follow the lives of the people in this enthralling world!

Much appreciation and praise,
DOL
aka
girl clambering to be number one fan of TVR

abosolutly fantastic. beuatiful beyond words. I applaud you.

I read less than half of the first chapter, and I knew that I loved this story. I find your style of writing to be really easy to follow, with just the right amount of detail. Also, your characterizations are amazing. It's see rare to see them this in character. Awesome job.

This story is genuinely a brilliant masterpiece. I just sat in front of my computer reading for who knows how many hours straight and my eyes are killing me, but it was worth it. I look forward to the next chapter. <3

Oh My Gosh!
I'm on the edge of my seat right now!
- WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!?!?!-
:D:D:D:D LOL


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I've built walls, a fortress deep and mighty,
that none may penetrate.
I have no need of friendship, friendship causes pain.
It's laughter and it's loving I disdain.
I am a rock, I am an island.

Don't talk of love, well I've heard the word before.
It's sleeping in my memory.
I won't disturb the slumber of feelings that have died
If I never loved I never would've cried.
I am a rock, I am a island.

And a rock feels no pain.
And an island never cries.

I can't wait for an update! What connection does this have with what actually happened in Kingdom Hearts? I wonder what would happen if Sora showed up? Would Sora recognize everyone?

Wow...this story is amazing! Zexion/Ienzo has always been my favorite character from Kingdom Hearts. I haven't read your other 2 chapters so far but when I find time I difenitly will. Your a really great author, and when you finish this story... you should publish it I think.
-My rating: 1,0,0 out of 10!
Your story writing has inspired me to do my own writing too.
:D
Don't give up and you will go far!

Thanks a bunch! :):):):):):):)

wow this story has grabbed my attention. the first chapter i got board of ((i wasnt myself i was probably my other guy self)) but then i saw it again like two days ago (which was about three days ago) and i skipped to the second chapter and i just couldnt pull myself away from this since and i read like three chapters for both days (i read mostly at night if it was the daytime i would of finished reading this in one day!) but i love this story so much. the characters are almost exactly alike ((in kh2 they talk about it being almost a carbon copy but still some things that make them diffrent so its ok)) the whole mental illnesses are fantastic and how you portray everyone is just amazing.the last few chapters were so good too and just now with the whole 'myde just had water floating around him OMG' that was just the perfect place to leave off((much to my dismay of course but we all need to make sacrifices no)) i found the need to acually sign in to comment so that is amazing in itself. please do continue i hope you dont become one of those authors that have a great story in storage and just end it. i also saw you dev page if but for a moment in the passing when i saw it say "poet" i think you sould change that to "striving(and suceeding)author you are just too good not to put that somewhere!!

This is the intriuging Zemyx story I have ever read. I like how you take it slow and gradually. I couldn't help but grin stupidly when Demyx threw Zexion down the laundry chute. That was hilarious! You're a great writer.

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter of this story. (I re-read it all the time when I'm just tired of nothing being able to find a different fic that's as good as this one is.) Ever since this chapter came out I've been waiting on the edge of my seat wanting to find out what's going to happen with Demyx. :D So I'll still be sitting on the edge until you put out the next chapter. :)

I love this story and would wait forever to get to read the next chapter. (Hopefully I won't have to wait that long, though. :P) Keep up the awesome, awesome work! :D

I left you a really long review a few hours ago and I came back to check if it was posted, but apparently it wasn't. My internet was acting up and now I don't remember all the things I wrote. D:

I think you are a genius. I love the way you write and I love your idea of making an AU where the character's KH-verse counterpart somehow creates the AU character's mental disorder. The characters progress nicely and they stay in character. The way you write the character progression is very realistic and I think the way you managed to subtly incorporate psychology is amazing. (I know nothing about psychology since I'm a computer science major so that might not mean anything to you, but I know good writing when I see it. I read too much fiction. xD )

I'm so happy with the most recent chapter. Yes! Demyx and Zexion are not figments of some institutionalized mental patient's imagination. I was hoping that Zexion and Demyx were real, but I was doubting it because of the whole projection of mental disorders thing. Even though you had written about the Nobodies showing up and the portals that appeared, I was still doubting until Myde's little performance of dancing water had witnesses. I'm so excited for the next chapter because I can't wait to see what comes next. I can't even imagine what's coming, especially when all this darkness finally decides to pop up from supposed non-existence, but Aerith's prediction sounds foreboding.

This is one awsome story and i really enjoy the description this story has. I hope you update this story soon!

I really like this so far!
You write incredibly well and you've written a really interesting story here!
I love the idea behind it and zexion (or ienzo)'s point of view is really fascinating and fun to read
You're writing is interesting enough that despite it being a paired fanfiction you don't actually need any smut to keep people reading...infact, smut might have ruined the story's inteligent and intense feel
I am loving this story (and wishing I'd found it sooner!)
keep up the awesomness! XD

D: Please, for the love of all things living, finish this story. I couldn't stop reading from the time I booted up the computer every day, I had to finish that sentence, that paragraph, that chapter.

Your writing style is simply sublime. I positively love how you describe everything, make the emotions(or rather, lack thereof) so palpable and easy to envision. Especially in the last chapter when you described how Myde/Demyx was able to manipulate the water, it was astounding! So original..no one has ever before, that I've seen, described what it was like to be caught in the Darkness of nowhere and everywhere, all at once. People just..overlook Oblivion. They describe the color and emptiness, but not how fearful it is and what it does!

And the Asylum idea! So original, and it makes everything work so perfectly! And not to mention, everyone remains perfectly in character! Zexion's always a hard person to keep in character..everyone makes him so...they turn him into a rock that tries to cut itself, or is snippy with everyone. But you don't do that. You make him civil, and you can see how he deliberates..nothing seems careless about him. Even when you don't explain his thoughts, you can clearly tell, without having played the game, that there's always double, triple meanings to his half truths and his occasional humor.

And Myde! Oh, glorious. He's not some bubbly..giggly little..girly thing. He's masculine. He's friendly, and ditzy, but you pull it off flawlessly, without making him seem like he's this helpless, clueless, and utterly stupid thing.

Unfortunately, I never beat Final Fantasy Seven or Eight, so..heh, I can't drone on and on about them, but please! You have to finish this amazing work of literary art. D:

...crap. That is the only word for this. Crap. Demyx is screwed. NU T_T

That being said (no, I wasn't talking about your story! Don't worry!!), this story has some of the best writing in terms of ... mental deterioration(?) I've ever seen. The changes that the characters slowly go through, both Demyx and Zexion (in his flashbacks), are conveyed extremely well. I especially loved the description of the pure joy Demyx was in in the last part of this paragraph. Well, before the "oh shit" moment.

I think I'll actually be looking into that book you listed at the end of this chapter...

Thanks for the chapter! Hope you update soon!