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| xXaussie609dancerXx 2008-07-23 ch 14, | abuseInteresting chapter, I really like how this one played out and glad that they made it to the Olympics. I also find it funny that your OC can talk to the actual anime characters about the anime and not have them look at her weird or anything like that. Can't wait to see what'll happen next!! Please, please, please, please update as soon as you can?!?!? |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-05-13 ch 9, | abuseAH this was SO GOOD! sry it's tooken me so long to read this chapter but i've been busy with writing my own stories and school... but i'll read the rest of the chapters you have later okay. i have a lot of review for the final tests for school to do first. anyway this chapter was great! the ending of the chapter tore my heart out and stomped on it and i can't wait to get the time to read the next chapters! |
| Gin-Nee 2008-02-11 ch 8, | abuseUpdate soon! I love it! ASAP update! Kris: -smacks Grey on head- I think she gets it! -growls at Kris and starts chasing her around- Oh look Trig . . .TRIG!! -runs away- Kris: -laughs and holds up Trig book- I knew that would make her stop chasing me. . .anyway seeing as she isn't here anymore. . .she really enjoys the story and hopes that you update . . . mentioned above -points up top- |
| xXaussie609dancerXx 2008-01-31 ch 7, | abuseAwesome story!! It's about time Kai found a girl that was kinda like him and shows the emotion we all knew he had!! By The Way, you might want to include a disclaimer on the first chapter so you don't get in trouble... PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE(ASAP) OR AS SOON AS YOU CAN(ASUC)? |
| Rage of the black phoenix 2008-01-30 ch 3, | abuseAWESOME! i just noticed that max doesn't have his partner! well maybe i'll find out who it is in the next chapter or two... and sadly...again i have to stop. but i'll most defintly read the next when i get the time!! (smiles) |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-30 ch 7, | abuseAH this is so good! though i feel sry for rebecca...but at least max cheered her up! PLUS THEY WON! WOOT! lol, anyway i can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. ^_^ |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-25 ch 6, | abuseit's good! i'm happy both of them won!! heh heh, never underestimate alana..heh heh!! |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-25 ch 5, | abuseAW this is so good! i'm glad max found his partner! update soon okay. and i'll get my friend to read the next chapter! |
| Rage of the black phoenix 2008-01-16 ch 2, | abuseAH, wow, this is getting good...sry to say it tho...i gotta stop there for the day tho...i have things to do. but i'm glad i'm leaving myself at a cliffhanger, because hey alana's about to get hit...and i hope someone will save her...but anyway love the story and i'll read the next two later...(runs off to get more sugar) |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-16 ch 4, | abuseAH! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! it's so cute! even if the beginning was some pretty bad news it was pretty much forgotten when kai and alana KISSED! lol, well i can not wait for the next update, and i'll go and tell my friend to hurry up and read the rest of your story! ^_^ |
| Rage of the black phoenix 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseheh heh, well i tried to use wolf-shadow6's account to review on this story...then it said only one review per chapter...so i'm like crap...so here i am!! anyway wolf-shadow6 was right when she said she thought this was very ineresting!! i'm liking is so far, and if i finish the many piles of homework i have, i'll read two and three! but anywho, please update soon for chapter four, that way i have three to read if i don't read the rest of them...heh heh! |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-15 ch 3, | abuseLOVED IT! COOL! so alana is Kai's protecter! awesome...oh and for future reference my friend, she uses my account only if authors don't allow people who don't have an account review, so if you see my name more then once, it's because she's using my user name...but she'll tell you who she is...she goes by the name rage of the black phoenix...i might get her to read this because it's really good. |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abuseAH UPDATE SOON! i'm really liking this story...please keep going |
| wolf-shadow666 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abusethis is a very interesting piece of work, i'm loving it so far so...i'm gonna go and read the next part now...^_^ |