sorry for not reviewing you
the story is going great and i hope alana reaches kai on time
still no one can beat him
love the story

I loved it! That was an awesome update and I nearly forgot about this story. =P I love your writing style and can't wait for more.

it is confusing that why they want there souls as well as there bit beasts well i love the story till now by the way can you tell me in which country you live i you want toknow why then just curious

I love this story and the way you describe the everything. It's a story worth reading when any time and won't ever get old. Keep up the good work.

Go Kai, although he should have thrown a punch or two ;3

Good chapter :P

Alana need to learn how to fight. :P

Kai should show up to save the day. ;3

Kinda short, but nonetheless good chapter.

It would be so awesome if bitbeasts and such were real. *_*

Interesting chapter. I can't wait till I have the chance to read more. :3

Ouch, 3 months away.
Hope Alana and Goldflame are alright.

Good chapter, kinda short though. :p

Oh... Damn that sucks. Wonder if Alana will find a way back? :3

Awesome chapter.

Ouch, that had to hurt Dunga. But that's Kai for ya. :D

Nice battles. ;)

Go Alana! >:D

Kind of short, but nevertheless good chapter.

I know how it is to be separated from a long time friend. >.<

Anyways, cool chapter! :3

Hmm, I wonder who matches up with Max. Very intense chapter. ^_^

Go Kai! >:D
It would be so wicked to be able to go back and forth between worlds. ^_^

Interesting chapter. :D

Natalie is such a jerk, she should get whats coming to her.

Another good chapter. :3