 blaze 2009-12-19 . chapter 29 sorry for not reviewing you
the story is going great and i hope alana reaches kai on time
still no one can beat him
love the story |
 SynysterPhoenix 2009-08-25 . chapter 25I loved it! That was an awesome update and I nearly forgot about this story. =P I love your writing style and can't wait for more. |
 blaze 2009-08-20 . chapter 25 it is confusing that why they want there souls as well as there bit beasts well i love the story till now by the way can you tell me in which country you live i you want toknow why then just curious |
 SynysterPhoenix 2009-03-28 . chapter 8I love this story and the way you describe the everything. It's a story worth reading when any time and won't ever get old. Keep up the good work. |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-21 . chapter 13Go Kai, although he should have thrown a punch or two ;3
Good chapter :P |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-21 . chapter 12Alana need to learn how to fight. :P
Kai should show up to save the day. ;3
Kinda short, but nonetheless good chapter. |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-20 . chapter 11It would be so awesome if bitbeasts and such were real. *_*
Interesting chapter. I can't wait till I have the chance to read more. :3 |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-20 . chapter 10Ouch, 3 months away.
Hope Alana and Goldflame are alright.
Good chapter, kinda short though. :p |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-19 . chapter 9Oh... Damn that sucks. Wonder if Alana will find a way back? :3
Awesome chapter. |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-19 . chapter 7Ouch, that had to hurt Dunga. But that's Kai for ya. :D
Nice battles. ;) |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-19 . chapter 6Go Alana! >:D
Kind of short, but nevertheless good chapter. |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-16 . chapter 5I know how it is to be separated from a long time friend. >.<
Anyways, cool chapter! :3 |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-16 . chapter 4Hmm, I wonder who matches up with Max. Very intense chapter. ^_^ |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-14 . chapter 3Go Kai! >:D
It would be so wicked to be able to go back and forth between worlds. ^_^
Interesting chapter. :D |
 ZanzaZero 2009-01-14 . chapter 2Natalie is such a jerk, she should get whats coming to her.
Another good chapter. :3 |