A great story. Very good.

Ow! More more! Love this, it's precisely how I've pictured it (apart from Tony being in love with Jeanne. She's so annoyingly clingy, it's just too much of a stretch). But well done!

This is good... so very very believable... wow.

Brilliant. Great job!

Would love to see that scene between Tony and Jenny on the show. Hope you write more NCIS stories.

this going to be very interesting to see how you develope it! loved the beginning!

Awesome start! Please continue, I can't wait to read what happens next. Are you going to write about Jenny's secret, and what you think it is? And is Gibbs going to make an entrance? Can't wait for more :D

I doubt Tony knows any of this I dont think heknows any of this hes just jennys puppy that does whatever she commands

...*speechless* ...(in a good way lol)

Wow, very nice. I've been waiting for some stories to fill in the gap of where the season left off. Would love to see Gibbs enter into the picture. Continue?