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Melah94
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
hahahahahaha this was hilarious! i was laughing the whole time, poor priest lol
niki-natsumi
2008-01-22 . chapter 1
haha:) funny.
toboe059
2007-12-28 . chapter 1
lol, that was too funny!! loved the story!! ^_^
lea
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
this one was so funny i really enjoyed it keep up the good work I will always love your work!
Dark-Hearted Writer
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
Hilarious! I loved it!

You know, it's extremely RARE to find a pulchritudinous story such as yours here on FanFiction-Dot-Net. It would have taken me MILLENNIA to find such an exquisitely beautiful fan fiction here on the site, with it being cluttered with ugly, mediocre stories. You've certainly proven yourself adroit in the field of literature.

Where'd you get the idea of a hilarity-barraged wedding? Frankly speaking, even I wouldn't have thought of this plot for an animé series such as Blood+. You even added humor to it. It was intelligent of you to do so. Congratulations.

Your grammar is SUPERB. I couldn't find any errors in your wonderfully written story. If there were errors (and I'm positive there aren't any), they would've been so minor that not even the most eloquent and meticulous of readers would find it.

Note that I rarely give such NICE reviews. Consider that fact proof that you really are a wonderful author.

...Dark-Hearted Writer...
Arhani Daforcena
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA funny! LOVE IT!
juana rocha
2007-11-15 . chapter 1
that was funny oh and on that part that it said you may now kiss it wouldve been funny if it was solomon, haji you may now kiss and then they kiss almost everyone fainted but not everyone it's funny about the picture thing
SilverLunarStar
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
{Writing while reading}

Wow... it is a miracle: Saya not pigging out...

Half red, half blue... interesting...

Hehehe, I guess Solomon is the only marrying in white...

Haji rolling his eyes... unexpected.

Muahahaha, of course Amschel paid for everything. =D

Hehe, a lot of "Saya" and "Diva"s.

Poor priest... no one deserves to marry Diva off...

HAHAHAHA! Wow, Saya has a dirty mouth.

*snorts* That's sad, Haji didn't know what to say...

*bursts into bouts of laughter, shakes head* Haji's just to funny and sad... saying his vows to Diva and not attending practice. *tsk tsk* Haji.

Err... aren't his bandages on the right...?

*sniggers* It IS her fault...

*giggles like crazy* "'My face muscles won't move. I haven't used them in years.'"

Nice ending!

~*Eli
Hajihajihajihaji
2007-10-27 . chapter 1
OMG! What a funny fic! Hahahahahahahahaha, couldn't stop laughing! How about writing a sequel; Haji and Saya and Solomon and Diva's married lyf? Nice fic!
ourankraze
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA~

juz can't stop laughing... great story!
LR
2007-10-08 . chapter 1
LOL
ruby32alchemist
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO FUNNY!! *can't stop laughing* I HAD TO BITE MY HAND SO THAT WOULDN'T LAUGH SOO HARD! KEEP UP WRITING FUNNY FICs LIKE THIS ONE... AND WHAT ABOUT MAKING A SEQUEL OF THIS, INSTEAD OF DIVA AND SAYA'S WEDDING, DO DIVA AND SAYA'S "DAUGHTERS" BIRTHDAY PARTY, HOPE YOU CAN WRITE IT


~ruby32alchemist
kakashidiot
2007-06-27 . chapter 1
Haji shrugged. “My face muscles won’t move. I haven’t used them in years.”

ahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha! Ohmigosh!

THAT WAS WAAY WAY WAY too funny. I'm a HUGE Haji fan... so this fic was priceless. It's good to be able to laugh at a charicaturization of your fav bishie! so good! and you know... rather IC in a way...

hope you write more crack in the future! *fav*
rin-ciacco
2007-06-25 . chapter 1
i thought so...you're gay and therefore anything that you make will be either as gay as you or gayer...

joke.

anyway you're good in this kind of stuff..keep it up
Kuro-Hidama
2007-06-18 . chapter 1
:: cackles ::

Oh Lordy, this was good. I was laughing from beginning to end. :D
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