This was good. You kept the charators in line and it seemed very life like.

Nice job.

Cool story :)

greetz: Wraith Fan -x-

I quite enjoyed this story and it had plenty of action. As far as Teyla goes, I believe you wrote her in when she was needed. Thank you for a good story.

Very nice. I very much enjoyed this fic and you finished it well. I know, reading the end quite late. Well, keep it up.

I do like the ending quite a lot.

You did a very good job of keeping everyone in character, and I especially liked your portrayl of Carson, he was very realistic!

Overall, this was a really good fanfic

Please keep writing this well :D I cannot wait to read more!

Nice story; I liked the whole thing. Good pacing with lots of action, and everyone sounded just like themselves. Great work!

Very nice chapter and conclusion! The first scene between John, Rodney and Carson was the part I liked the most; after all the trouble and what happened in the previous month, this marked the return to normalcy, and no doubt really gave Beckett the feeling of being home and among friends again. Loved Jamie sticking to Carson's arm, showing how happy HE was for the good doc's return.

To my mind the guilt Carson felt for killing all the Wraith was very much in character. He is a person who cares about friend and foe; this characteristic is one of his fortes. I think he will need a while to accept that he had no other choice but he will surely never like to use such means. And as a dedicated doctor, this really shows his quality.

In my opinion you hit the nail right front and centre the way you wrote how Ronon dealt with his experience. Just as Carson-even if their reasons are not exactly the same-, he beats himself up for what happened, literally. This paragraph made Ronon throughout the story very believable and true to character.

Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story!

Be assured that I will be among your faithful readership as soon as you add the next (Carson-centric) piece of work.

I dunno... I always see Carson as a dog person. But hey, Jamie is cute :)

Awesomeness! You finished it! This was a great story! I'm gonna have to read it again some time :D I'll also be waiting to read a new story from you ;D maybe maybe?

Anyway thanks so much for sharing this with us!

Lots o' love!

Tippy

What a great end to one hell of a fic.

Keep up the great job and I can't wait to read what you have in store for us next.

Yeah! you finished it.

great closing chapter.

wonderful story.

As always, a wonderful chapter. Carson is too good a doctor for his own good sometimes. And always with the John whumpage... poor guy. Laters.

They were rescued! phew. thought they'd be trapped for ever.

someone has to fix Radek. Radek needs his brain unpressurized. Yes.

great chapter. hope to see the next one soon.

glad to hear you're feeling better.

Good thing Shep DIDNT hug Ronon... a cut throat would have been hard to fix...

"He was pounced by a dozen medical personnel who had never looked so happy to see injured people in their lives."

That was a brilliant sentence, it really was!

Yea, so I'm over here (as you can hear me) giggling and squeeing over your Shep whumping. It definitely meets my fan-girlish whumping-angst-loving soul's requirements for happiness! Very cool.

As I already said, I loved the figuring out of what to do with the ship (BOM!) and Ronon's response of "Still alive."

Another great chapter!