 mellombror 2009-02-19 . chapter 2Great story this one, liked it very much! nothing to complain about here as always ;)
it was really good, like the others, so please, keep writing :D
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Chris |
 sakurablue13 2008-11-29 . chapter 1wow, that was strong and intense
great job! |
 zomish 2007-10-29 . chapter 2Not really sure how I missed this story originally, but-
I loved it! Very great story and great idea. I love Carson when he is quiet, strong and brave. You always portray Carson in his most selfless and powerful! Thank you. -Zoe |
 LadyNiko 2007-07-19 . chapter 2Images - what an appropriate title. Your use of imagery in this is just excellent!
Very good capture of the scene and of the characters. :) |
 JuneBug625 2007-06-18 . chapter 2Absolutely beautifully written. Really enjoyed. Thanks! |
 twinchaosblade 2007-06-11 . chapter 2A really fine story, flah7!
The content of your fanfiction piece is brilliant, very believeable. Your characterizations are great and you have wonderful phrases and ideas. I especially liked your explanation why Beckett and McKay had ears and the fear Sheppard saw on Carson's face. But the most wonderful of ideas must be Carson feeding the fish with bits of his cast! HILARIOUS! Also Beckett and Ronon saving the day works for me every time! |
 Mercury's Winter 2007-06-11 . chapter 2Beautifully written, loved every word, thanks! |
 cybersyd42 2007-06-11 . chapter 2Beautiful, beautiful fic. So powerful in so few words, I teared up towards the end. Lovely use of language, the absence of speech, the snippets of body language speaking volumes. Close to poetry. |
 sablecain 2007-06-11 . chapter 2 Beautiful story. Just simple and contemplative and so descriptive. Loved the imagery of Ronon standing over the others protecting them- glorious--and loved that it was Carson's "magic" that really made the natives back off. Terrific! Hee. Sheppard's decision to let Teyla have the hallmark moment is perfect! Perfect! |
 sablecain 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 I like this. I love how we learn through Sheppard's POV. Very cool. |
 AbsolutAnda 2007-06-11 . chapter 2That was a beautiful story.
It made me feel warm and fuzzy.
I like how you kept the Sheppard-Whump down instead of giving him three broken ribs, a fractured leg, major concussion and internal bleeding.
That really bugs me sometimes.
Anyway, amazing story!
I loved it!
Wouldn't change a thing about it! |
 angw 2007-06-11 . chapter 2Really lovely and I like the 'imagery'. I like how you weaved in the past and present. :) |
 Valexie 2007-06-10 . chapter 2Thanks for the creamy filling. Beckett really is a miracle worker. Nicely done. Very visually written. Descriptive. I can picture the horror/fear in Beckett's face as he realizes the futility of his actions, a friend dying despite his best efforts. Ronan standing tall fending off natives left and right, blood spraying. My only complaint is that the story ended to soon. No pressure, but what's next. |
 The Wraith Sleep Tonight 2007-06-10 . chapter 1OMG I clicked fanfic to take a stance for my friend Koyla and I find you have written a story... it looks wicked long... and there are no pictures... oh what do I do? A) read your story B) fight with the wraith about bedtime C) do my hair... choices... |
 coreymason 2007-06-10 . chapter 1This story was not only well written but great descriptions of the team. Thanks for writing something very heart-warming and interesting. Hope you write something else soon! |