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Ranter
2009-06-15 . chapter 4
What the hell? naruto as a male mind in a girl's body is the same as naruto bein gay. Y the hell did u do permanent mind switch? just wrong on so many levels
Piggy Kun
2009-05-10 . chapter 4
Hm I bet they're going to end up taking a shower together lol. Cant wait to read more!
Rawrmander
2009-03-29 . chapter 4
Great story! Took me a little while to get used to the "her/his" thing; and once I did it did keep feeling a bit awkward; probably my biggest complaint with the story.
On the flip side: the characters are kept fairly true to themselves, (which is very important to me) there is great humour and story elements featuring character development.
Keep up the good work;
I'll be waiting for the next release,
~Rawr
garsdal
2009-03-27 . chapter 4
ehehehe!
this is genius! why did i never see a fic like this before? the confuced arkwardness is eppic:D
Quackpotty
2008-11-24 . chapter 4
Awesome story. Absolutely hilarious, and I can't wait for more. I saw on your profile that the next chapter is at 100 percent? Is it coming soon? Can't wait. Thanks for the story so far. I'm loving it. NJOY!!
Sonic Flood
2008-10-08 . chapter 4
I Already told you how banging this story is!
Jman85
2008-10-07 . chapter 3
I'd be able to follow the story better if I could figure out which body was actually talking at times. When you go from talking about Naruto talking to Naruto's BODY talking, or vice versa for Ino, it makes the story line MUCH harder to follow. Don't get me wrong, I think the situation is hilarious, but the confusing changes in perception for the two main charactors makes it much more of a pain to follow at times.
RyuuTenshei
2008-08-15 . chapter 4
The last time i read this story was almost a year ago.
I was hoping if I stopped checking every week then there would be a lot of chapters to read, sadly this story still hasn't been updated. Please update this as soon as possible.
This is still the best naru/ino story i have ever read and still is and this is coming from a guy who's read like a million of them. This is one of the funniest fanfics i have ever read so please dont abandone this story :)
hope to read more soon your fathfull reader :)
Chibi Naru-chan
2008-07-20 . chapter 4
Drat
I was hoping that this fic went on a bit longer
Didn't notice it only has 4 chapters when I clicked the link
Chibi Naru-chan
2008-07-20 . chapter 3
LMDAO
OMG

Dinner was hilarious!

I got the clean shaven joke after Naruto said it the second time
XD
Chibi Naru-chan
2008-07-20 . chapter 2
LMAO
Chibi Naru-chan
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
LMAO That fight so random it was awesome!

Also

I loved the way you opened with Naruto's mission
So very dramatic the way Naruto offed that guy. :D
Equitas
2008-06-30 . chapter 4
I happened across this story while really bored and going through older stories and was very pleasantly surprised. This is really well written, really funny and just really good. I don't suppose there's anyway I can convince you to pick it up again and continue it?
Sungawd Ra
2008-06-09 . chapter 4
Man... I have to say this is very good. It's funny, and while some of the situations are pushing it, it's still flows nicely.

Is it weird halfway though the first chapter, I could tell you wrote excellent Ranma fanfiction? It shows here in a very good way.

I hope you get around to completing this one, and maybe even a jumping point for them to go to 'Spring' Country. Off to read your other fics I somehow missed.
kaptin-hippy
2008-06-05 . chapter 4
I liked it, but it would have been easier to understand if you had just left the pronouns the same despite them changing into a different gender. It was confusing to keep remembering that 'him' is refering to Ino. I can only imagine the difficulty in writing it the way you have.
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