wow, that was pretty sad. i always feel bad for peter, because it seems like no matter the situation, he's controlled by nathan. you did a very good job with this fic!

This was sad and touching, and hot too.
I liked the way you portrayed Nathan and Peter, with some darkness between them and in their relationship.
Good job!

that was something

Im not really into them two relationship wise, but I was curious.

I liked this quote "Peter never asked him why. Peter didn’t want to know. Peter wanted to believe Nathan was doing him because he loved him back."

Pretty sad. Nice writing.

I thought this was great! I can kinda tell that english isn't your first language- but not terribly, I think you wrote it pretty well considering that fact. I like that you explored some of the more negative suggestions of the Nathan/Peter realationship. I think they work well as a couple (incest aside) but I've always been shocked that more people don't deal with some the darker overtones- especially the 14 year age difference... Anyway, I like the Nathan the peter-puppetmaster image 8*D

eww..eww..eww
ugh..whats your bloddy problem? SO EXTREMLY PERVERTED...EW