Oo.. wow. Go Aerith! I love this, anyway. And I'm not some mindless Aerith fanatic.. this was great, right on my favs list! Oo.. I'm at a lack for words.. so, I can babble!

Good, definately good. Several parts really caught me in sveeral places, but i think some parts could have been improved upon. Altogether a good read and a great look on the human condition!

Thanks for the story!

YOU owe ME a soda!

I thought it was verry in depth and had a lot of meaning to it. I makes me think about where I'm gonna go with things and hope it turns out all right, and that things aren't as messed up as they seem they are. sure we live in a crazy world, but it's not all bad. that's what this story makes me think about

I'd like to apologise to anyone who read the version of this story that was previously posted. For some reason, it wasn't completely finished, and some ppl got a bad impression! But, at the same time, some people liked it, so now I'm just confused. *grins* But enjoy!

Ah, this is beautifully written. It shows an introspective side of Aerith that she mostly covered up during the game. She covered it up with seeming innocence; she wanted to be merely innocent, but . . hehe, Cloud was more innocent than she.