aw...that was cute!

Sweet story. Like I've said before, there aren't enough Kim X Bonnie fics out there. This was a pretty good one :-)

Nice one shot. I wonder how Ron would act seeing Bonnie and Kim kissing. An interesting take on explaining Bonnie's need to best Kim, though I doubt would hate someone unless they were a killer or rapist. If you give any of my stories a read, review and tel me what you think.

best story ever

Aha! A continuation, what a wonderful surprise! I have often imagined Bonnie as a bit angsty on the inside, it's fun to see her written like that.

Although the story is great, there is quite a lot of grammar mistakes, you should have a look at it.

Keep it up, I'd certainly would like to see more.

Really well done, in my opinion. I like the fact that you are willing to branch off into a pairing that very few people use (even though it seems that as of late more people are willing to write Kim/Bonnie, much to my joy). I enjoyed the ending a lot (gave me the warm fuzzies). Anyway, continue with the great writing, I hope to see more stories from you soon!

This is quite good. I'd not read your works before, but a comment on a forum directed me here.

This is a 'softer side' of Bonnie that I like to write, the Bonnie who wants love so badly and has no idea how to get it. She lashes out at all possible lovers, and their response is expected: the lash strikes back.

Having her in love with her rival and being willing to give up her prize for her: a classic response.

Good pacing, nice characterization, and overall a good story.

...cpneb

i enjoyed reading it, good one.

That was a pleasure to read. You got Bonnie's emotions wonderfully. There are very few Kim/Bonnie fics and this one was enjoyable. Great work ^_^

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Woo-Hoo!! Love the drama... Fantastic KiBo, and I'm sure you already know that its one of THE most underrated pairs.

Excellent work...

Not too bad. It was pretty good. I enjoyed the beginning, but I didn't care too much for Kim here. I mean, she was acting like Bonnie had done something underhanded to win. Where, I agree with Bonnie's statement that she couldn't stand it if someone else did better. But it was still quite interesting. Although, I kinda got the feeling that Bonnie might choose to stop trying with anything when she was getting all depressed. At least that's the feeling I got from there. Anyway, thanks for posting this and dedicating it to me. ^_^

With all the Kigo fics out there it's easy to forget there's a perfectly sexy pairing between Middleton High's top cheerleaders.

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Well I have to say I'm very honored to have such a wonderful fic dedicated to me. After I got done reading it I was trying to think of what I could say about it in a review but the only word that came to my mind was: powerful. That's exactly what this fic is. It's short, but it is powerful. I could actually SEE the kiss Bonnie gave Kim and felt sorry for her throughout the whole thing. While I do agree you could leave it as a one shot, I'd also like to see what the fallout would be. How Kim would react. How the cheerleaders react. How the whole school handles hearing about the incident. And of course what Ron would think about hearing about his best friend being kissed by her rival. I just think a lot of fun could be had with it.

Either way though, this is still a great fic and a true pleasure to read. You captured all the emotions perfectly. Can't wait to see more from you.

Not bad. Some of the phrasing was a little awkward and I had to reread a few parts, but not bad. Thanks for the read.