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| JuseaPeterson 2007-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was funny. I loved it. Blake/Hunter's conversation brought up good points. Cam's: Loved how he pointed out the difference in the younger and older Sensei Tori's: That was hilarious. Switch bodies for a completely different perspective Lothor: Interesting bit between the brothers, wouldn't have thought of that. Funny with going through the family tree. Marah and Kapri: Hilarious. I think you got them done right. Kapri-pink, Marah-Orange, not purple, but that's okay. I liked the Marah/Dustin and Kapri/Shane mention. Good story. |
| jonoave 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseHehe, cool and totally awesome. My favourite was the first conversation - cool ending! The writing was good and structured, and the lines were quite witty too. Great job! |
| GinaStar 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuse loved it! |
| robster72 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseVery funny I like this! Especially the "never trust an evil space ninja!" and the copies of "Play hamster" but I'm a guinnea pig! Plus the fact he takes them with him when he goes as well! |
| CamFan4Ever 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuse*Has a giggle fit* Loved this! Congrats to Dany! |
| Psycho Tangerine 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusePlayhamster...hehehehe. This is being added to my C2. |
| Chylea3784 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseVery funny and well done! |
| Furlings are Cats 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseAh, you put the funny back in PR. Nice story! |
| MzDany 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseFOR ME?!?!?!?!?!?!? YOU ARE MADE OF TOTAL AWESOMENESS! |
| friendlyquark 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseOkay, you made me laugh out loud! Playhamster? Oh my! That was totally killer! |
| Dagmar Buse 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Cute! |