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Reviews For: Lyoko versus XANA

PrncsAelitaSchaeffer
2008-05-10
ch 5,
abuseIt's good but in the summary you said that XANA tried to stop them. In the story he did nothing.
FanFiction Writer 22
2007-07-19
ch 5,
abuseCool story sis keep it up.
Clevelandrocks
2007-07-05
ch 5,
abuseThat's so sweet... I especially love the detail Zell. you truly have a flair for making stories wonderfully!
I hope you make more of Jeremie and Aelita's love! its adorable!!
AussieUlrich
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseGood begining. Wonder what Xana is planning.
Tastes of Strawberries
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseGood start!
You may want to tone it down with the character descriptions- since this is fanfiction, your audience already knows who they are. Try devoting your description to the scenery, or to objects, but don't be too long-winded.
You've done a nice job capturing typical show dialogue.
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