Lol, they got Team Rocket! It's so funny... they had no idea Dante wanted Surge's Raichu dead, and now they are in custody. I like them better in custody.

Dante's now Famous-With-Me lines. "Who would have thought I would be in trouble after killing someone?"

This Pikachu is beginning to rock out loud. Although granted, he is evil...

Now... he has to kill all these Pikachu during the festival... I wonder how this will go?

O.O

Dante did NOT need to do that! (Well, for the sake of the plot, yes, he did.) But that was still so wrong! (Yet so funny! *Has some moral issues*)

Team Rocket really didn't know what they were getting themselves into, siding with Dante. That guy is ruthless. I'm still laughing over how he just ended Raichu like that.

Hmm.. I wonder what's next? By the way, his moveset is awesome! I say screw the "only four moves at a time" rule, too! ^^

Dang. Those Raichu owned Dante. He should've taken a better plan, rather than barging in and attacking random Pokemon.

I still can't tell if I want Dante to suceed or fail... hmm...

Mewtwo's a nut. Showing up and yelling "Beg for mercy." But still pretty cool.

That twenty-fold Thunder Attack... I'm surprised Dante isn't dead. That must've hurt like heck.

What the heck is wrong with Dante?! He didn't give the Clefairy a second thought... he's like Sasuke! In someways...

My favorite line of his must've been: "The arrogance of that Pikachu! I'll end his life soon."

I couldn't help but laugh. And why did Mew attack him like that? What is WRONG with these Pokemon!? Dante's got issues. Serious issues.

Evil story. 10/10

WHY DIDN'T YOU KILL MICHU?!?!?! UGHH!

AFTER DANTE'S HARD WORK, THAT STUPID FOOL IS THE NEW LEGENDARY POKEMON?! NO! I liked Dante so much...

Truth be told, hated the ending. But only because it didn't go the way I wanted it to... :( ahh well.

Good story though but Michu makes me sick. Boo her.

What?!? That's it?!? No ending where all pikachus come back alive? No Dante seeing the errors of his ways?

But seirously , i am not telling you how to do your story telling. I personally think you ended a little too short. It just lacked that charm of your work that it usually had. But great work! I just hope you have a sequel in store, you left tons of room for one!

YAY! Everything worked out in the end! This is great!

BANZAI!! MICHU!! BANZAI!! SPARKY!! BANZAI!! PIKACHU!! BANZAI! TT_TT

dude...why couldn't you just have Dante revive his trainer?? But whatever floats your boat.

Dante You'll never be a legend!

Personally, I think Dante does not have a chance against Michu, Sparky and Ash's Pikahcu.

Very good, I look forward to how this will end.

mabe more dialog? anyways still interesting

O_O...WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL MICHU??!

good chapter wow cant beleive michu died