I am new to the whole world of fan fiction and I wanted to let you know that these two stories (Time shift and Slip) are by far the best I've read. I wish I could read a more expanded story! I can't get enough of these characters. I love the way that Gabriel/Sylar is developed. It is entirely believable that he has good qualities as well as dark. I also appreciate the way that you balanced the sympathetic with the just plain scary. It didn't feel like you were trying to get us to believe in a Jessica/Niki situation. I think it's much more interesting this way. As you continue to write Slip (which I really hope you do), just be aware that it is just as hard for your reader to keep track of when we are as it is for Ellen. Maybe you can add asteriks or more defined spacing. Mostly just keep the story coming! And hopefully let us see more why Peter has become so obsessed with correcting this one tragedy. Are Claire and Nathan alive in whatever time stream he's travelling from? Is he alone? I'm so interested to read more. Thanks for writing these.

Ooh, lovely beginning although I am a little confused. I'm sure that it'll all be cleared up. And why can't she love Peter!?!? I'd love him in a second. Looking forward to reading more.