"The bell has been raised
From it's watery grave
Do you hear it's sepulchral tone?
A Call to all
Pay heed to the squal..."

Gosh I've read this over and over again and still can't get enough of it! I'm reading it again! Well, very well done!:-)

Hi!
So I just read your second chapter, even though I had put this story in my favorites a long time ago...
I didn't remember reading it, so I'm rereading/reading it xD
So far, so good ^^
Really! I love it! It isn't like any pirates story I've ever read before...
And I'm curious... Will she and Will come together or something? Is Jack still alive? Please let Jack still be alive! Even though Will is my fav, Jack knows how to bring life into a story!
Anyway, I'll review again after I read the last chapter... Or maybe somewhere in between if I can't hold myself :')
x

this is getting really intense. can't wait to finish!

I'm so glad i found this fic. Not all treasure is silver and gold as everyone here knows, and this fic was a bit of pirate treasure itself.

Well I found this story late and read it all before reviewing. I really quite enjoyed it although I felt sorry for Andy. But Will and Elizabeth belong together. I like your idea of bringing in the original owner of the Pearl and having him also be the forst Pirate King. I look forward to reading your other stuff. :)

ok, I'm impressed. I really liked this one. You should think about writing your own stories. But I really did enjoy this one.

You know that the place where Jack gets the picture of the key is a Turkish prison, don't you?

Perhaps we'll just assume that the Dutchman sails faster than a normal ship.

Still loving the story.

Just a little picky thing to be constructive -

"he hates the idea of mine and Will’s marriage, I can tell."

This is a bit awkward. Maybe " he hates the idea of my marriage to Will" would be better?

“That won’t work!” Anamaria shouts, “we have to stir out of this ourselves!” the number of women posed on the rocks multiples. They won’t let us simply stir out.

Not sure what you meant to say here. Stir -did you mean steer?

Cool idea with the sirens, though!

Interesting the way you've started weaving all the old 'gang' back into the story.

Ferrara just isn'ta very nice person, now is he. :P

An unexprected twist in the plot.

Curious to see how they get Jack 'back' and where the Pearl is at.

"Uh buddy, hate to break it to ya, but the world is round,” Andy tells us, we ignore him."

Oh, Andy...Andy. Someone clue this boy in!

The plot thickens...
off to find the Pearl then.

Elizabeth remebers Will! Huzzah!

Love the battle sequence so reminiscent of the wedding in AWE.

Fun chapter again!

More great action!

"It’s a menacingly old and tattered ship, like something right out of the days of the East India Trading Company"

This is fun how this comparison slips into Liz's mind about the Dutchman.

Onward!

Another exciting chapter. Good to jump in and strike an accord early for Lizzie, but now she's in a bit of a jam!

Fun story so far!

Alas, I must away to real life for a short while, but you can bet I'll be back for more!
Cheers!