This is a really interesting story! Please continue it!

Well this certainly is a big change from your previous plot, I like it. I hope you continue with your work and don't stop, for too long. Nice refrence to dbz, I still remember those... Continue to work hard, and this will be a superb story.

CZ

I really enjoyed your story and im looking forward to whats going to happen next. Update soon..=]

Well Will its obviously fantastic. I can't wait to read more, but I didn't get to see the old chapter 8 before it was revised. Do you still have it? If you do, I'd like to read it and see how different it is.

I really liked this chapter. I particularly loved the line, "This isn't another genjutsu, is it". The line is perfect and I loved it. The story is superb, and I await future chapters.

I know you're busy and all, and I really wanted to thank you for writing this cuz I could never do anything like this, but is it possible for you to have a date that you'll update by? I know that I'm waiting on my toes for the next chapter :)

Hi, great story. I like how are you developing the Rykie character. I find it much more interesting when there is competition between 2 "normal" characters than when it's 1 "good" & 1 "bad". I hope u update soon!

I liked how Sasuke showed a glismpe of his emotions to Sakura and I liked the thing about sealing away the Sharingan which Sasuke was thinking about. Thanks for updating!

Ryken,

You're my best friend man, and I love this fic. However, you should stop the little ones you're doing and focus on the goal, man. I've seen all your other little fics and they're good, man. But you need to finish this one, not just for your viewers, but for you too. It'll make you feel that much better if you're done with it.

-Kaguya Kirsizan

Cool story! I've been whatching it since the first few chapeters. And I like how it's changing. Keep ot up!

this is a great story, nd i cnt wait till u update(:

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wahh! wat d hell is d relationship between ryuki (watever her name is) and sasu?
oh well it is a sasu saku after a ll! yay

no! sasu's first kiss shud of been with saku!

wat first encounter!?? dis is a sasu saku rite?